In Chloe's Smile
a swap quatrain126 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
You have written a wonderful poem from an absolutely brilliant photo of Sawyer and Chloe, Children in play are fascinating. Their innocent smiles and giggles.
I've lost my heart to Chloe's smile,
her winsome ways that so beguile.
With all the love I can impart,
to Chloe's smile, I've lost my heart.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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You have written a wonderful poem from an absolutely brilliant photo of Sawyer and Chloe, Children in play are fascinating. Their innocent smiles and giggles.
I've lost my heart to Chloe's smile,
her winsome ways that so beguile.
With all the love I can impart,
to Chloe's smile, I've lost my heart.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Mary, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Oh Sawyer! How sweet, and what a lovely picture of innocent childhood friendship.
An enchanting Swap Quatrain poem with a very thoughtful choice for repeated lines.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Oh Sawyer! How sweet, and what a lovely picture of innocent childhood friendship.
An enchanting Swap Quatrain poem with a very thoughtful choice for repeated lines.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Seken, for your encouraging comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
I've lost my heart to Chloe's smile,
her winsome ways that so beguile.
With all the love I can impart,
to Chloe's smile, I've lost my heart.
ADORABLE ADORABLE..............ADORABLE
I love this Brooke
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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I've lost my heart to Chloe's smile,
her winsome ways that so beguile.
With all the love I can impart,
to Chloe's smile, I've lost my heart.
ADORABLE ADORABLE..............ADORABLE
I love this Brooke
God bless
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Deb, thank you so much for your generous response to my poem :-) I am so happy you found this adorable. Brooke
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Brooke it's Jenny but Deb is my sister :o)
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sorry about that - I am forever getting names wrong :-)
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That's ok I only remember yours cos it's my daughters name :o)
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I also sign my name to reviews, knowing what a hard time I have remembering - that is cool that it's your daughter's name - I've always like it :-)
Comment from marijmd
What a beautiful love poem - how very tender and heart warming. My 8 year old has a bit of a hard crush right now - so cute to watch him carry her back pack to the car after school.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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What a beautiful love poem - how very tender and heart warming. My 8 year old has a bit of a hard crush right now - so cute to watch him carry her back pack to the car after school.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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marijmd, thank you so much :-) how sweet about your son :-) Sawyer isn't that smooth yet. LOL Brooke
Comment from Leineco
. . .(the names have been changed
to represent ALL the innocent ;-)
At any age, at every age
a winsome smile, beguiling eyes
can capture the heart
make spirits soar, put rainbows in skies -
At any age, at every age
nothing beats a warm embrace
a hand to clasp
love's call and chase :-)
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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. . .(the names have been changed
to represent ALL the innocent ;-)
At any age, at every age
a winsome smile, beguiling eyes
can capture the heart
make spirits soar, put rainbows in skies -
At any age, at every age
nothing beats a warm embrace
a hand to clasp
love's call and chase :-)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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thank you so much for your thoughtful poetic response to my poem, Leineco :-) Brooke
Comment from rrabinow
I like the rhyming that you used. And I like the description that was used, it really helped to paint a picture of the love that is felt!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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I like the rhyming that you used. And I like the description that was used, it really helped to paint a picture of the love that is felt!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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rrabinow, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Terror2s
A lovely photo as usual. I used to make up poems about my son and a little girl named Francesca They do look happy walking together. T2
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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A lovely photo as usual. I used to make up poems about my son and a little girl named Francesca They do look happy walking together. T2
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
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Abby, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from michaelcahill
This is delightful. I love those little details that make for perfection. "enclasped", just a slight difference and yet that is exactly the way it should be. All throughout the piece, little things like that take it to the next level. All of those little details do matter. Excellent. mikey
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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This is delightful. I love those little details that make for perfection. "enclasped", just a slight difference and yet that is exactly the way it should be. All throughout the piece, little things like that take it to the next level. All of those little details do matter. Excellent. mikey
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Mikey, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gladness
To lose your heart at such an early age, oh, my! And I thought I was young at five to have a boyfriend.
I love the phrases you use that show the devotion of a young child, "warmth that can not be surpassed" for example.
Blessings,
Anita
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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To lose your heart at such an early age, oh, my! And I thought I was young at five to have a boyfriend.
I love the phrases you use that show the devotion of a young child, "warmth that can not be surpassed" for example.
Blessings,
Anita
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Anita - this little girl is so cute - her favorite thing to say is "Sawyer's so cute," and he loves to make pretend phone calls to her, which he has been doing for months. LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from kintesiegel
what a wonderful poem and sentiment. What a lucky child to have a poet like you in her life. I look forward to reading more and more about your great love for the world and its beings.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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what a wonderful poem and sentiment. What a lucky child to have a poet like you in her life. I look forward to reading more and more about your great love for the world and its beings.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Bev, thanks so much :-) Brooke
