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Mono - Rhyme (Humor)3 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Being the owner of two abs contraptions that are gathering dust, I completely understand and empathize with this one. Great use of mono-rhyme, all sounding natural and not forced, the only thing forced those unfortunate sweat pants.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
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Being the owner of two abs contraptions that are gathering dust, I completely understand and empathize with this one. Great use of mono-rhyme, all sounding natural and not forced, the only thing forced those unfortunate sweat pants.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
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ROTF... You always could get a brrhaha with your quick wit. My reply is ridiculously overdue and unforgivable, although I'm not sure that you'll see it since you have left the site. One of a kind, you will be missed for the remains could never touch your style. I sincerely apologize for a long belated thank you and wish all of the best that life can bring. Take good care, JR
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, the monorhyme is best suited to humour as you have demonstrated here. This is a piece of lightweight fun that gave me a few chuckles:
Behind is reason to commit,
With britches in a tizzy snit,
I'll squat and snarl, I'll cuss and spit.
A double chin hangs down a bit.
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Yes, the monorhyme is best suited to humour as you have demonstrated here. This is a piece of lightweight fun that gave me a few chuckles:
Behind is reason to commit,
With britches in a tizzy snit,
I'll squat and snarl, I'll cuss and spit.
A double chin hangs down a bit.
Steve
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Hi, As you may be aware, I've been away for well over a year regarding to many life changes to mention. Stopping in has been limited and brief, nevertheless, I should have taken a moment to acknowledge those gracious enough to leave feedback prior to my absence. For this, I sincerely apologize. Albeit, ridiculously belated I'd like to thank you for your generous thoughts and comments. JR
Comment from Eric1
Love the sense of humor JR, it gave me my first laugh of the day, absolutely wonderful image of overweight old fellah , double chin, straining with split pants to lift, Loved itmy friend.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Love the sense of humor JR, it gave me my first laugh of the day, absolutely wonderful image of overweight old fellah , double chin, straining with split pants to lift, Loved itmy friend.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Hi, I've been away for well over a year regarding to many life changes to mention. Stopping in has been limited and brief, nevertheless, I should have taken a moment to acknowledge those gracious enough to leave feedback prior to my absence. For this, I sincerely apologize. Albeit, ridiculously belated I'd like to thank you for your generous thoughts and comments. JR
