Freewill Forebodes
The war amongst, between, within...2 total reviews
Comment from Linda Engel
very nicely written , expressive and heart felt. very good rhyme and meter, it is sad the start of the world and the gift God gave us, freewill , and we abuse it. very nice and thank you for choosing my photograph for your illustration...stik551 (Linda)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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very nicely written , expressive and heart felt. very good rhyme and meter, it is sad the start of the world and the gift God gave us, freewill , and we abuse it. very nice and thank you for choosing my photograph for your illustration...stik551 (Linda)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful review. Your photograph is exactly what I had in mind, so glad I found it. -Peace
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
O wow! I really feel your pain in this poem. Speaks volumes about our world today. Very good social commentary also!...great job! keep writing!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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O wow! I really feel your pain in this poem. Speaks volumes about our world today. Very good social commentary also!...great job! keep writing!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much. I don't post as much of my poetry as I would like to, don't know why. Thanks for your encouraging words. I love that you appreciated the social context I brought into the piece. Thanks again!
