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Bel Air: A Bard's Guide

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Live! From The Roof of Ceasar's!"
Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.

13 total reviews 
Comment from akeaturtle
Excellent
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Great! Love the writing flow, the building suspense and the introduction of the characters. I was right there and it left me wanted more!

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    So very happy to hear it. Music to my ears. Hope you stop by and read some more. Big smiles. Thank you very much. mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is an absolutely perfect mix of humor and exciting action. The misuse of Marie Osmond's name is hilarious!! And the Bard pulling a fast one was so something he would do. The peace sign!!!! Too funny... just a liitle subtle touch. Genius. Great chapter. NG

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    WOw. You hit on every aspect I was hoping for. I'm taking you on the road with me. Thank you so very much. I'm delighted. :))) mikey
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You are a busy lad. Talking about being serious, this reads exceptional. That Winston deserves a bullet to the brain. But he knows where the other kids are, that pedophile. Damn, you are getting sharper. You are a busy man. This is perfect. Count your doubloon. Damn, where did that nugget come from? I'm cowlicked, thought I was out! Count your doubloon, Sir Mikey.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Glad you liked this. A couple days off from this gave me a second wind. This was fun to write. Someone suggested that Wayne Newton should get involved. Hahahaha. Be careful what you wish for my friend. I'm very impressionable!!!! mikey
reply by ProjectBluebook on 01-Jul-2014
    Surprised me you remembered. I think I'm nuts? Getting in to that competition with them big guns. Maybe, some mental therapy is in order? LOL! Can I check in there ...LOL! Do a little reviewing tonight.