Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Live! From The Roof of Ceasar's!"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
13 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Boy, you are really doing some base jumping here, Mr parachute. I dare you to make Wayne Newton an active, ongoing character....No. forget I said that lol. Just take out Winston.
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Boy, you are really doing some base jumping here, Mr parachute. I dare you to make Wayne Newton an active, ongoing character....No. forget I said that lol. Just take out Winston.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this one is filled with great humor and gives the sense that some people are not paying attention to details. I a person cannot get the name right, then how can they solve a case? Good dialogue and I do like the direction of the plot. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this one is filled with great humor and gives the sense that some people are not paying attention to details. I a person cannot get the name right, then how can they solve a case? Good dialogue and I do like the direction of the plot. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
Comment from l.raven
OHhhhhhh Michael, Bard shooting peace signs...and Wayne just not sure...but they are closing in...they can't kill him...where is Angela ??? OMG...now what??? Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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OHhhhhhh Michael, Bard shooting peace signs...and Wayne just not sure...but they are closing in...they can't kill him...where is Angela ??? OMG...now what??? Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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I don't know! I guess I better get back to work and write it. I didn't want you to get too far behind. So, I waited till you got back!!! mikey
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Thank you so much Michael... no matter what I will get there...can't wait to get home....I love visiting...but it has been a long run...I'm tired...time to slow down...compose my thoughts... you are a sweetie...thank you...Luff Ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Nosha17
That was a very well thought out plan, with all the figures like men on a draughtsboard being moved. Good progression to the story, let us hope the hostages remain safe. Good humour, too. Enjoyable as always. Faye
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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That was a very well thought out plan, with all the figures like men on a draughtsboard being moved. Good progression to the story, let us hope the hostages remain safe. Good humour, too. Enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Glad you liked it! I don't usually kill anyone unless they are really creepy. Hahaha. Thank you, mikey
Comment from adewpearl
Mary Osgood, Marie Osmond - whatever LOL
love how concerned everyone is over the welfare of Wayne Newton - this is just too funny
Is any of this getting through to you, Knowles? -add comma for direct address
great use of dialogue throughout - a good mix of humor and action/thriller :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Mary Osgood, Marie Osmond - whatever LOL
love how concerned everyone is over the welfare of Wayne Newton - this is just too funny
Is any of this getting through to you, Knowles? -add comma for direct address
great use of dialogue throughout - a good mix of humor and action/thriller :-) Brooke
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much. I took a couple days off to get a second wind! This was fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you kindly. mikey
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. Winston is surrounded. The ending will be much beeper with civilians involved. This could be the worse mistake Winston made. It took well known people and made the case be noticed by everyone. Great work.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I love the story. Winston is surrounded. The ending will be much beeper with civilians involved. This could be the worse mistake Winston made. It took well known people and made the case be noticed by everyone. Great work.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Yep. Winston isn't where he wants to be. Glad you're enjoying it. Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from seaglass
Great events happening here. I chuckled to see Wayne involved in the activity of the rescue. The only thing he would not be able to do is raise his eyebrows. His face lift and botox makes his face totally immovable. lol
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Great events happening here. I chuckled to see Wayne involved in the activity of the rescue. The only thing he would not be able to do is raise his eyebrows. His face lift and botox makes his face totally immovable. lol
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Hahaha. I think he has hidden mechanical devices in his pocket to simulate expressions! I had to get Wayne in the mix. Trying not to overdue it! mikey
Comment from Sankey
Good stuff mate. What about Russell Crowe and Alec Baldwin in the Mercury Rising movie if you remember that one it could give you some ideas where to go with this.
Good story some spags.
consider(-')s his options
Director Knowles covered his mouth(piece)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Good stuff mate. What about Russell Crowe and Alec Baldwin in the Mercury Rising movie if you remember that one it could give you some ideas where to go with this.
Good story some spags.
consider(-')s his options
Director Knowles covered his mouth(piece)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I'll have to look that up. This was fun to write. Took a little breather to get a second wind!
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The main star of that movie (character) is an Autistic boy
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Nice set up to take down Winston. I like using Wayne Newton in the scheme. Winston may decide to jump rather than spend his life in prison, and if that happens, how will they find the children...hmmm....
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Nice set up to take down Winston. I like using Wayne Newton in the scheme. Winston may decide to jump rather than spend his life in prison, and if that happens, how will they find the children...hmmm....
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Can't let him do that. Gotta find those kids. I'm sure the Bard will come up with something. Maybe Wayne will sing him to death... mikey
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Maybe Wayne will sing him to death.
LOL! That's possible. (You can tell I'm not a fan.) :)
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Nobody should be...
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, I like Wayne's reaction to seeing the Bard. If you're not used to him, it is easy to be surprised. The plan is in place, and now let's hope Mr. Murphy don't much up their plans. Another well crafted chapter.
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Haha, I like Wayne's reaction to seeing the Bard. If you're not used to him, it is easy to be surprised. The plan is in place, and now let's hope Mr. Murphy don't much up their plans. Another well crafted chapter.
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Yep, good old Murph. I took a couple days off to get a second wind. This was fun. Glad you liked it. Thank you! mikey
