If Heaven Ever Visits Earth
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6169 total reviews
Comment from MisinformedPoet
This poem flows so beautifully when read out-loud, it has almost has a melody to it's rhymes.
Beautiful imagery in "Kaleidoscopes of butterflies".
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This poem flows so beautifully when read out-loud, it has almost has a melody to it's rhymes.
Beautiful imagery in "Kaleidoscopes of butterflies".
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Misinformed Poet, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
I didn't know they were call a kaleidoscope. I had one as a child - loved it! I love butterflies too, but am saddened by the apparent decline of the Monarch. My garden used to be full of them. I rarely see them anymore.
What a bright image you've created - an image of Heaven on earth. You wrote about caterpillars the other day, so it's fitting, somehow, that you now write about butterflies.
I enjoyed this, Brooke.
Av
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I didn't know they were call a kaleidoscope. I had one as a child - loved it! I love butterflies too, but am saddened by the apparent decline of the Monarch. My garden used to be full of them. I rarely see them anymore.
What a bright image you've created - an image of Heaven on earth. You wrote about caterpillars the other day, so it's fitting, somehow, that you now write about butterflies.
I enjoyed this, Brooke.
Av
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Av, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bryan G
Kaleidoscopes of butterflies. Feels like heaven indeed. I can see images of yellow and black. I can almost hear the gentle rush of a million butterfly wings. This a great poem.
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Kaleidoscopes of butterflies. Feels like heaven indeed. I can see images of yellow and black. I can almost hear the gentle rush of a million butterfly wings. This a great poem.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Bryan, thank you so much for your generous rating and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'If Heaven Ever Visits Earth' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review.
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'If Heaven Ever Visits Earth' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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thanks so very much, duchess :-) Brooke
As always Brooke, you're more than welcome
:-) the Duchess
Comment from Joeguzvill
Awesome! Though it's a kinda short, the essence of poem is present. The flow of words are precise to thoroughly convey the whole idea of the poem. Worth more than 5 of stars!
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Awesome! Though it's a kinda short, the essence of poem is present. The flow of words are precise to thoroughly convey the whole idea of the poem. Worth more than 5 of stars!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Joe :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
Brooke, I never knew a flock of butterflies was a
kaleidoscope. Somebody got it right for once (although a murder of crows seems appropriate, too).
I guess heaven does visit earth every now and then.
Peace, Lee
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Brooke, I never knew a flock of butterflies was a
kaleidoscope. Somebody got it right for once (although a murder of crows seems appropriate, too).
I guess heaven does visit earth every now and then.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Lee, thanks so much for your generous sixth star. I never knew it was a kaleidoscope either until I Googled it while writing the poem - so glad it didn't turn out be be an unpoetic herd. I also love a murder of crows :-) Brooke
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Brooke,
Lovely piece of poetry having matching the theme wording and beautifully depicting its theme.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
"...kaleidoscopes of butterflies.."
Excellent!
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Hello Brooke,
Lovely piece of poetry having matching the theme wording and beautifully depicting its theme.
Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
"...kaleidoscopes of butterflies.."
Excellent!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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RP, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is gorgeous artwork Brooke and a lovely rhyming quatrain on this kaleidoscope of butterflies.
If heaven ever visits Earth,
a great repeating line in this quatrain. Bright and cheery.
valda
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This is gorgeous artwork Brooke and a lovely rhyming quatrain on this kaleidoscope of butterflies.
If heaven ever visits Earth,
a great repeating line in this quatrain. Bright and cheery.
valda
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Beautiful photo that complements your poem very well. If Heaven ever visits Earth, you wish to see a kaleidoscope of butterflies. Nice one.
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Beautiful photo that complements your poem very well. If Heaven ever visits Earth, you wish to see a kaleidoscope of butterflies. Nice one.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Ine, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. A did not know that about butterflies. It makes sense. What a beautiful image to bring to mind. Heavon usually gets all those white clouds...I think I prefer butterflies:-)
padumachitta
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Hi. A did not know that about butterflies. It makes sense. What a beautiful image to bring to mind. Heavon usually gets all those white clouds...I think I prefer butterflies:-)
padumachitta
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
