If Heaven Ever Visits Earth
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6169 total reviews
Comment from Dustybones
I really like the words REQUEST and BEHEST, the rhyme is super cool. LOL too, but you always are the best with words. Cya later I hope. I have been extremely busy with other projects. My two year old dog eats all of my time up!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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I really like the words REQUEST and BEHEST, the rhyme is super cool. LOL too, but you always are the best with words. Cya later I hope. I have been extremely busy with other projects. My two year old dog eats all of my time up!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Dustybones, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome!
Comment from costellsgirl33
If Heaven ever visits Earth.........I love that sentence.
Such a beautiful line and its paired beautifully with the rest of your poem. I love the image that you used. Such a great poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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If Heaven ever visits Earth.........I love that sentence.
Such a beautiful line and its paired beautifully with the rest of your poem. I love the image that you used. Such a great poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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costellsgirl, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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You are more than welcome Brooke :)
Arnetta
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, this has simply lovely balance in the meter and rhyme. The nuances of joy that comes from the most basic beauty that we are honored to behold is strongly portrayed in a pure form. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Brooke, this has simply lovely balance in the meter and rhyme. The nuances of joy that comes from the most basic beauty that we are honored to behold is strongly portrayed in a pure form. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from wiljacro
HI! adewpearl. What an absolutely beautiful scenario to hope for to happen if Heaven visited Earth, now all I can wish for is to be present whenever your wish comes true. I hope you chose a lucky star to wish upon and, to make sure, please accept my 6 . wiljacro.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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HI! adewpearl. What an absolutely beautiful scenario to hope for to happen if Heaven visited Earth, now all I can wish for is to be present whenever your wish comes true. I hope you chose a lucky star to wish upon and, to make sure, please accept my 6 . wiljacro.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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wilajcro, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
I really liked your color scheme here and the picture was perfect for the words as well. You always write such positive thoughts in your poetry. Most poets, including myself, just write more on the negative side of life and living. But once again you have made me smile... John
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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I really liked your color scheme here and the picture was perfect for the words as well. You always write such positive thoughts in your poetry. Most poets, including myself, just write more on the negative side of life and living. But once again you have made me smile... John
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, John :-) Brooke
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning brooke
have a seat
let me ramble for a moment
first
the quatrains are wonderful
always is the format clean and clear
second
your theme is lovely
third
your entry and words are very much poetry
and yes
even your title
I love titles
all are so poetic
last but not least
you are once again an artist
your presentation and chosen image are beautiful
so very fitting for the theme and entry
thank you for sharing your talent
it was a pleasure to read your words
enjoy the day and written word
ann marie
PS
can I join you in putting my request in as well
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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good morning brooke
have a seat
let me ramble for a moment
first
the quatrains are wonderful
always is the format clean and clear
second
your theme is lovely
third
your entry and words are very much poetry
and yes
even your title
I love titles
all are so poetic
last but not least
you are once again an artist
your presentation and chosen image are beautiful
so very fitting for the theme and entry
thank you for sharing your talent
it was a pleasure to read your words
enjoy the day and written word
ann marie
PS
can I join you in putting my request in as well
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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thank you so very much, ann marie, for this most thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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hi brooke
you are most welcome
truly
always do you deliver quality and attention to detail in each entry you compose
Comment from elchupakabra
I really love the kaleidoscopes of butterflies line, that is beautiful imagery and certainly a strong repeated line that helps encrust the picture in the readers' minds. Really great work on this piece, Brooke, your mastery of poetry is always a joy to read.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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I really love the kaleidoscopes of butterflies line, that is beautiful imagery and certainly a strong repeated line that helps encrust the picture in the readers' minds. Really great work on this piece, Brooke, your mastery of poetry is always a joy to read.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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elchupakabra, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from NotYou
If Heaven ever visits Earth, I hope I'll be able to see someone close to me that leave my family for just one last time.
This poem is well made, and definitely sticks to the principal of butterflies. The artwork is awesome, by the way.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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If Heaven ever visits Earth, I hope I'll be able to see someone close to me that leave my family for just one last time.
This poem is well made, and definitely sticks to the principal of butterflies. The artwork is awesome, by the way.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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NotYou, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
There really is heaven on earth when you consider all the beauty. I love your presentation - yellow everywhere. I once read that if we wear yellow, we can't be depressed. I found it really works. Also, I had my office walls painted yellow. Needless to say, I enjoyed this poem.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
There really is heaven on earth when you consider all the beauty. I love your presentation - yellow everywhere. I once read that if we wear yellow, we can't be depressed. I found it really works. Also, I had my office walls painted yellow. Needless to say, I enjoyed this poem.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Lou, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from GBTEXT
The poem wishes heaven should visit the earth, and the persona has a waiting request. The language of this poem is quite romantic and rather allegorical of 'Heaven" and 'Earth". Yet its diction is so fascinating. And so is its structure, with the refrain "If Heaven ever visit Earth", implying ... prospect.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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The poem wishes heaven should visit the earth, and the persona has a waiting request. The language of this poem is quite romantic and rather allegorical of 'Heaven" and 'Earth". Yet its diction is so fascinating. And so is its structure, with the refrain "If Heaven ever visit Earth", implying ... prospect.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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GBText, thank you so much :-) Brooke
