If Heaven Ever Visits Earth
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6169 total reviews
Comment from fairy77
What a lovely poem and so sincere. I loved behest and butterflies. I love the display. You make thousands smile everyday. I smiled. Well done! beth fairy77.
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What a lovely poem and so sincere. I loved behest and butterflies. I love the display. You make thousands smile everyday. I smiled. Well done! beth fairy77.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Beth,thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, what a beautiful thought ... kaleidoscopes of
butterflies. Also, an amazing picture. Pictures sure
can give us inspiration. also, great presentation
with the background and font colors.
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Brooke, what a beautiful thought ... kaleidoscopes of
butterflies. Also, an amazing picture. Pictures sure
can give us inspiration. also, great presentation
with the background and font colors.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
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heyjude, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the beauty that touches us through the butterflies that fly down to reach us...
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the beauty that touches us through the butterflies that fly down to reach us...
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
Just beautiful, and I didn't know a group of butterflies was called a kaleidoscope...as you said, quite appropriately! My favorite thing about reading FanStory poems, the tiny nuggets of knowledge! Blessings tonight...Judy
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Just beautiful, and I didn't know a group of butterflies was called a kaleidoscope...as you said, quite appropriately! My favorite thing about reading FanStory poems, the tiny nuggets of knowledge! Blessings tonight...Judy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a stunning photograph to accompany your stunning rhyming quatrains. I love the word kaleidoscope. it just flows off the tongue and kaleidoscopes of butterflies is a lovely image. Beautiful title, beautiful message. Well done.
Janet
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This is a stunning photograph to accompany your stunning rhyming quatrains. I love the word kaleidoscope. it just flows off the tongue and kaleidoscopes of butterflies is a lovely image. Beautiful title, beautiful message. Well done.
Janet
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
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Thanks so very much, Janet :-) Brooke
Comment from Tegan1311
This is a very well written poem. Your words flow well and your message is clear and easy to understand. Your poem is informative (what the group is called) and vivid with the addition of the picture.
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This is a very well written poem. Your words flow well and your message is clear and easy to understand. Your poem is informative (what the group is called) and vivid with the addition of the picture.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
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Tegan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I look on FanStory as a whole extension of my education because I never cease to learn new things each day. I loved this stunning presentation, Brooke, adorned with your beautiful picture and arresting poem. Giddy
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I look on FanStory as a whole extension of my education because I never cease to learn new things each day. I loved this stunning presentation, Brooke, adorned with your beautiful picture and arresting poem. Giddy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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thank you so much, Giddy :-) I also love to learn something new each day! Brooke
Comment from Bina1
What a stunning presentation of your fine poem! Indeed, how very appropriate they are called a kaleidoscope, a majestic one at that. Thank you for sharing.
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What a stunning presentation of your fine poem! Indeed, how very appropriate they are called a kaleidoscope, a majestic one at that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
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Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JudyS
This is a great poem. I didn't know what a group of butterflies were called. I have learned something new today. Great job and you picked the right picture to do with it. I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing it. Judy
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This is a great poem. I didn't know what a group of butterflies were called. I have learned something new today. Great job and you picked the right picture to do with it. I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing it. Judy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Judy, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
This is a nice poem that I learned something from. I didn't know a group of butterflies are called a kaleidoscope before. I enjoyed the read, but I miss Sawyer's picture.
Kat
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Hi Brooke,
This is a nice poem that I learned something from. I didn't know a group of butterflies are called a kaleidoscope before. I enjoyed the read, but I miss Sawyer's picture.
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Kat, thanks so much :-) Sawyer will return! LOL :-) Brooke
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I'm glad to hear that. He is so precious.
