One Too Many Drinks
Some say staggered some say he fell she said doomed3 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very telling here for these words written.
Drinking alcohol can be relaxing and enjoyable.
We must remember that drinking can make us very ill
We can die because of drinking, loss of friendships
When we drink to much.
honey tree
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The art work is very telling here for these words written.
Drinking alcohol can be relaxing and enjoyable.
We must remember that drinking can make us very ill
We can die because of drinking, loss of friendships
When we drink to much.
honey tree
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Sad poem, Walter. No one here writes from the rougher, rawer, unrequited-love, drinking, searching side of life better than you.
I pray the demons are fictional, or if autobiographical, soon to be controlled.
God Bless you, Walter.
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Sad poem, Walter. No one here writes from the rougher, rawer, unrequited-love, drinking, searching side of life better than you.
I pray the demons are fictional, or if autobiographical, soon to be controlled.
God Bless you, Walter.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
What a tale of a life distorted and twisted by alcohol and riotous living. Your unusual 'shorthand' style works well in this instance to present this bleak synopsis of a life.
The colours you use are illegible on my screen....
Steve
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What a tale of a life distorted and twisted by alcohol and riotous living. Your unusual 'shorthand' style works well in this instance to present this bleak synopsis of a life.
The colours you use are illegible on my screen....
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
