Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Zig Zag Man In County Jail"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from Sankey
Great chapter. I agree with the feeling of being in too much of a hurry that happened with my autobiography glad Leonardo came along to put some brakes on with some excellent suggestions. Hope you have seen both my recent offerings I think you may have seen the one on Energy in Hugs what about the one on the Fishing Camp? maybe you been there too sorry senior moment hehe.Well done mate now 1 spag or whatever...
Oops in the background....Kidnapping and child trafficking has stalled any trials (trails?)as the Bard, Lucy and Tenaya try to find Angela. Millions of dollars at play.
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Great chapter. I agree with the feeling of being in too much of a hurry that happened with my autobiography glad Leonardo came along to put some brakes on with some excellent suggestions. Hope you have seen both my recent offerings I think you may have seen the one on Energy in Hugs what about the one on the Fishing Camp? maybe you been there too sorry senior moment hehe.Well done mate now 1 spag or whatever...
Oops in the background....Kidnapping and child trafficking has stalled any trials (trails?)as the Bard, Lucy and Tenaya try to find Angela. Millions of dollars at play.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
Comment from Sasha
Not having read much of the previous chapter, I am not exactly sure what is going on other than this guy's in jail and his dialogue just cracked me up. I've been in jail and, fortunately, not at all like you depict it. I felt I owed you another review. You come across as having fun with this one. I hope you are.
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Not having read much of the previous chapter, I am not exactly sure what is going on other than this guy's in jail and his dialogue just cracked me up. I've been in jail and, fortunately, not at all like you depict it. I felt I owed you another review. You come across as having fun with this one. I hope you are.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
