Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a most interesting poem - you raise a valid point, and your use of American Indian artwork drives home the point that unlike some cultures, generally, Canadians and Americans tend to leave the past very much in the dust (so to speak); it's a huge mistake. History repeats itself, and our ancestors have much to teach us.
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This is a most interesting poem - you raise a valid point, and your use of American Indian artwork drives home the point that unlike some cultures, generally, Canadians and Americans tend to leave the past very much in the dust (so to speak); it's a huge mistake. History repeats itself, and our ancestors have much to teach us.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi GW,
Beautiful pix! I've worked with the Hopi and Navajo when I worked for the state of Arizona. One of my bosses was Hopi, and a lovely lady.
The Native Americans are beautiful people. A very nice tribute to them. Well done!
Cheers & Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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Hi GW,
Beautiful pix! I've worked with the Hopi and Navajo when I worked for the state of Arizona. One of my bosses was Hopi, and a lovely lady.
The Native Americans are beautiful people. A very nice tribute to them. Well done!
Cheers & Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from fairy77
Liked would are achievements be worthy. This is a great piece and was so worth the read! It's a great commentary and philosophy or history. Nice work!beth fairy77.
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Liked would are achievements be worthy. This is a great piece and was so worth the read! It's a great commentary and philosophy or history. Nice work!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
Good point. We need to appreciate those that have gone before us in order to teach those that come after us to appreciate those that have gone before them. Okay, you said is so much better.
Concise use of words to deliver a thought-provoking message. Well done.
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Good point. We need to appreciate those that have gone before us in order to teach those that come after us to appreciate those that have gone before them. Okay, you said is so much better.
Concise use of words to deliver a thought-provoking message. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
Comment from words
Your opening line posses an interesting question ... not quite sure, however, what you are trying to say.
The artwork in the piece seems to be American Indian. Are you saying that because our forefathers killed off most of the native Americans with no regard of their value ... that we need to try harder to make b our lives worthwhile?
Sorry, I am lost.
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Your opening line posses an interesting question ... not quite sure, however, what you are trying to say.
The artwork in the piece seems to be American Indian. Are you saying that because our forefathers killed off most of the native Americans with no regard of their value ... that we need to try harder to make b our lives worthwhile?
Sorry, I am lost.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
Comment from judy.gordon
This is a very thought provoking poem. I love reading about the Native American Indians because they lived in tune with nature and worshiped God in their own ways. I have just one criticism. I think the" ?" should be place at the end of the poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This is a very thought provoking poem. I love reading about the Native American Indians because they lived in tune with nature and worshiped God in their own ways. I have just one criticism. I think the" ?" should be place at the end of the poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks judy
Comment from Glasstruth
You ask an excellent question. I think the problem is on how we interpret those achievements. The last line seems to be a part of what's written before, but that ends with a question mark. What if it would start as: "Will they be remembered by your descendants?" And of course that would end with a "?" Just a thought. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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You ask an excellent question. I think the problem is on how we interpret those achievements. The last line seems to be a part of what's written before, but that ends with a question mark. What if it would start as: "Will they be remembered by your descendants?" And of course that would end with a "?" Just a thought. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks for reading
Comment from seaglass
These are good words to ponder. We must look backward to remember lessons learned, that they not need to be relearned again. And we hope those lessons we learn in our lives will save those who come after us, repeated heartaches.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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These are good words to ponder. We must look backward to remember lessons learned, that they not need to be relearned again. And we hope those lessons we learn in our lives will save those who come after us, repeated heartaches.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from James Dooney
This is a great work here indeed. Its nice and short, yet packs a punch and just gets straight to the point. I like it and well done !
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This is a great work here indeed. Its nice and short, yet packs a punch and just gets straight to the point. I like it and well done !
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks James
Comment from Dean Kuch
Probably not, not as it stands right now, GW. However, I'm working diligently to change that, leave behind a lasting legacy for my family to be proud of. Living right, being good to others, being a God fearing man and spiritual leader of my household helps. That's all we can do, my friend. Our best...
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Probably not, not as it stands right now, GW. However, I'm working diligently to change that, leave behind a lasting legacy for my family to be proud of. Living right, being good to others, being a God fearing man and spiritual leader of my household helps. That's all we can do, my friend. Our best...
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks Dean
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My pleasure, GW
