Somebody Thinks
a rhyming poem in mixed meter153 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: perfect quatrains and rhyme delightful. Yes, the adults are suppose to know because the little ones want to know everything. . .and we cannot disappoint. Enjoyable read once again. Linda
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Brooke: perfect quatrains and rhyme delightful. Yes, the adults are suppose to know because the little ones want to know everything. . .and we cannot disappoint. Enjoyable read once again. Linda
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from flylikeaneagle
24 June 2014
Adewpearl:
Sawyer, is so cute and clever! Yes, this age has all the "why" questions. I still don't know where rainbows go. I like your bubbles burst and breezes blow and that somebody thinks I ought to know repeated in different lines. Excellent!
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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24 June 2014
Adewpearl:
Sawyer, is so cute and clever! Yes, this age has all the "why" questions. I still don't know where rainbows go. I like your bubbles burst and breezes blow and that somebody thinks I ought to know repeated in different lines. Excellent!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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flylikeaneagle, thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting and thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Life is a learning curve for us all and we have to work it out as we go.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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This is yet another interesting and thought-provoking poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Life is a learning curve for us all and we have to work it out as we go.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Tomes, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure yet again
Comment from evilynne
Your poems are so magical and whimsical! I enjoy them so much. I just love poems where you don't have to dig to China to find the meaning. You seem to catch the magic of a child's imagination so very well.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Your poems are so magical and whimsical! I enjoy them so much. I just love poems where you don't have to dig to China to find the meaning. You seem to catch the magic of a child's imagination so very well.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you, ev, for your encouraging and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Sawyer is so adoreable!
I would spoil him rotten.
You write of a deeper turth about childhood.
It is so short and this little boy seems to enjoy every moment.
That is sensational as is this write.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Sawyer is so adoreable!
I would spoil him rotten.
You write of a deeper turth about childhood.
It is so short and this little boy seems to enjoy every moment.
That is sensational as is this write.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Maddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from James Dooney
Well done here brooke ! You have given us another good one ! I love the theme of it - the whole " No one knows why ... " but we just get on anyway !
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Well done here brooke ! You have given us another good one ! I love the theme of it - the whole " No one knows why ... " but we just get on anyway !
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from prefabmouse
Well of course you should know, lol. I love how you expressed something that all parents deal with from their young children. They are so full of wonder and curiosity and lets not forget the never ending questions. They look to their parents as the ultimate authority on all things and truly believe their parents have all the answers and can fix all boo boo's.
Loved the writing style too, you did an awesome job.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Well of course you should know, lol. I love how you expressed something that all parents deal with from their young children. They are so full of wonder and curiosity and lets not forget the never ending questions. They look to their parents as the ultimate authority on all things and truly believe their parents have all the answers and can fix all boo boo's.
Loved the writing style too, you did an awesome job.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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prefabmouse, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Brooke,
A charming poem full of fun and wonder.
A little friend of my daughter once asked her Why was the sky blue?
She thought for a time, then replied: Because that's the color God had left in his paintbox.
You can't argue with logic like that!
Ron x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A charming poem full of fun and wonder.
A little friend of my daughter once asked her Why was the sky blue?
She thought for a time, then replied: Because that's the color God had left in his paintbox.
You can't argue with logic like that!
Ron x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Ron, for a lovely review - I appreciate your sharing that story :-) Brooke
Comment from ragamuffin
Another lovely and observant piece. Kids. Definitely, "why" and "how come," as well as always so full of desire to know and to learn. And of course they believe Mom, Dad, Nana, Papa should have all of the answers. Wish we did. A pleasant and enjoyable poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Another lovely and observant piece. Kids. Definitely, "why" and "how come," as well as always so full of desire to know and to learn. And of course they believe Mom, Dad, Nana, Papa should have all of the answers. Wish we did. A pleasant and enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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ragamuffin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brooke - Four really good stanzas in rhyming couplets. Perfect construction and very clever. A good read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke - Four really good stanzas in rhyming couplets. Perfect construction and very clever. A good read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
