Somebody Thinks
a rhyming poem in mixed meter153 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
What inquiring minds would like to know. And why not!
That is one way to mold and shape their character when the answer to those very intriguing questions become known.
Charlene
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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To adewpearl,
What inquiring minds would like to know. And why not!
That is one way to mold and shape their character when the answer to those very intriguing questions become known.
Charlene
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Charlene, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Donya Quijote
Delightful, innocent, whimsical, and full of the simple joys of childhood. For some reason this poem reminds of a conversation I once had with a very bright four year old about this and that and how he often provided the answer the to the question he asked, like why the sky is blue. Sometimes he was spot on and sometimes his answer had its own unexplainable logical. A pleasure to read as always....
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Delightful, innocent, whimsical, and full of the simple joys of childhood. For some reason this poem reminds of a conversation I once had with a very bright four year old about this and that and how he often provided the answer the to the question he asked, like why the sky is blue. Sometimes he was spot on and sometimes his answer had its own unexplainable logical. A pleasure to read as always....
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Donya :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a good picture. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell of how someone thinks the little guy should have all the answers.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Good poem with a good picture. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell of how someone thinks the little guy should have all the answers.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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GWinterwin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from babylonia
Brooke,
LOL Well, you know, you can't put it back together again without first taking it apart. LOL Another good one and it sounds like someone likes to ask a lot of questions. Tira was like that. LOL STILL is. Imagery is excellent. I hope you're having a great day.
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Brooke,
LOL Well, you know, you can't put it back together again without first taking it apart. LOL Another good one and it sounds like someone likes to ask a lot of questions. Tira was like that. LOL STILL is. Imagery is excellent. I hope you're having a great day.
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Barbara, it's good to see you. Thanks so much :-) Brooke
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Thank you ... yeah, life has been keeping me busy. Shirley B and I are having a book signing in July. I can't wait.
I miss everyone when I'm not here but sometimes you have too much to do and to little time.
Love,
Barbara
Comment from lancellot
A delightful poem. Who really knows the answers to any of life's real questions. We want to believe we do or someone does, but it's all just guesswork. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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A delightful poem. Who really knows the answers to any of life's real questions. We want to believe we do or someone does, but it's all just guesswork. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from SaluteDobby
Hi Brooke,
This is such a cute poem- and so true! I remember thinking that my parents knew the answers to all my questions when I was a child. The "why"s and the "whats" and "hows" were never-ending. :) I'm sure I tested their patience on many occasions.
Have a great day and thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Namratha
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
This is such a cute poem- and so true! I remember thinking that my parents knew the answers to all my questions when I was a child. The "why"s and the "whats" and "hows" were never-ending. :) I'm sure I tested their patience on many occasions.
Have a great day and thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Namratha
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Namratha, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Brooke: another splendid and joyful addition to the Sawyer Book of Joyful Poetry! All good in every way as always, the photo and the poetry...all beautiful! Vance
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Dear Brooke: another splendid and joyful addition to the Sawyer Book of Joyful Poetry! All good in every way as always, the photo and the poetry...all beautiful! Vance
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks so very much, Vance, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
After all is said and done, writing
poetry, no matter the form, is the
artistry of the poet who becomes
a story teller and has the ability
and the talent to keep the reader
immersed in the tale you tell in
musical cadence
Well done
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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After all is said and done, writing
poetry, no matter the form, is the
artistry of the poet who becomes
a story teller and has the ability
and the talent to keep the reader
immersed in the tale you tell in
musical cadence
Well done
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Karen B.
Yep, got to love that "why?" stage. Such wonderful curiosity they have but it can wear a grandma out. :) Beautifully written as always and a very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Yep, got to love that "why?" stage. Such wonderful curiosity they have but it can wear a grandma out. :) Beautifully written as always and a very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Karen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from judiverse
That sounds like a parent's response to a child's question--Somebody thinks I ought to know. Children have so many questions and adults can't begin to answer all of them. You show one's curiosity to learn about all kinds of things like why bubbles burst and fairies glow. Excellent alliteration, and the list of questions you have is fascinating. The rhyme and flow work beautifully. This is full of charm. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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That sounds like a parent's response to a child's question--Somebody thinks I ought to know. Children have so many questions and adults can't begin to answer all of them. You show one's curiosity to learn about all kinds of things like why bubbles burst and fairies glow. Excellent alliteration, and the list of questions you have is fascinating. The rhyme and flow work beautifully. This is full of charm. judi
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Judi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're so welcome. judi
