Somebody Thinks
a rhyming poem in mixed meter153 total reviews
Comment from Dawny53
I am not surprised to see another great piece of work by this author. This one reads so well, as his her style. I wish she would break away from what she typically writes, and give us something new.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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I am not surprised to see another great piece of work by this author. This one reads so well, as his her style. I wish she would break away from what she typically writes, and give us something new.
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you for reviewing, Dawny.
Comment from rod007
Sawyer is like me. I'm constantly learning about life even at this late age. So why is the sky blue and rivers bend. I simply don't know. Thanks, Brooke, for this very thoughtful piece.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Sawyer is like me. I'm constantly learning about life even at this late age. So why is the sky blue and rivers bend. I simply don't know. Thanks, Brooke, for this very thoughtful piece.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tegan1311
This is a very cute poem. Kids are always so eager and full of questions, wanting to know "why" for everything. Very well done and entertaining too.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This is a very cute poem. Kids are always so eager and full of questions, wanting to know "why" for everything. Very well done and entertaining too.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Tegan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
This is excellent. Perfect flow and rhythm The presentation is done in a delightful manner and the things "nobody" knows (Grandma, perhaps?) are flawless examples. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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This is excellent. Perfect flow and rhythm The presentation is done in a delightful manner and the things "nobody" knows (Grandma, perhaps?) are flawless examples. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
Hi Brooke, it wonderful the way they react to different things they learn...and I love you poem...no body knows...but somebody thinks they do...what a beautiful happy smile Sawyer has...smiling....Love it!!! Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke, it wonderful the way they react to different things they learn...and I love you poem...no body knows...but somebody thinks they do...what a beautiful happy smile Sawyer has...smiling....Love it!!! Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Linda :-) Brooke
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you are so welcome Brooke...xxoo
Comment from Cloe Z
I love this poem! It is very whimsical and very much shows a child's perspective. Your poetry reminds me a lot of A.A. Milne's work. I enjoyed it, as usual. Good work!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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I love this poem! It is very whimsical and very much shows a child's perspective. Your poetry reminds me a lot of A.A. Milne's work. I enjoyed it, as usual. Good work!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Cloe, thank you so much for your generous rating and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
How fast young Sawyer is growing. Wonder what Miranda is feeding him!
Another lovely one, told in the charming, most appealing child's voice.
Love it, Brooke!
Love,
Sonali
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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How fast young Sawyer is growing. Wonder what Miranda is feeding him!
Another lovely one, told in the charming, most appealing child's voice.
Love it, Brooke!
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Sonali. I'm laughing at the feeding question because the child is the world's pickiest eater. She has tried everything to get him to eat a bigger variety of nutritious foods, including consulting a nutritionist through her health plan! We keep hoping he will outgrow it because all the experts agree that you can't force it down his throat. :-) Brooke
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He is obviously healthy, so it's best not to worry, I suppose. That IS funny!
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That's what the nutritionist said. :-)
Comment from Leineco
Sounds like Sawyer's been asking questions
(the kind that tend to try your soul)
"I don't know" never suffices - and "because. . ."
just brings up another question! (After all,
you are a grown-up - you should know!)
I hear kids are adorable - but admit it
sometimes they are insatiable! :-)
Nice poem :-)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Sounds like Sawyer's been asking questions
(the kind that tend to try your soul)
"I don't know" never suffices - and "because. . ."
just brings up another question! (After all,
you are a grown-up - you should know!)
I hear kids are adorable - but admit it
sometimes they are insatiable! :-)
Nice poem :-)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Leineco, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - a lovely children's poem with a solid message I think they could understand easily. Skilled writing as always with a Cutie Pie sharing his smiles you have a perfect posting full of smiles.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Dear Brooke - a lovely children's poem with a solid message I think they could understand easily. Skilled writing as always with a Cutie Pie sharing his smiles you have a perfect posting full of smiles.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Maureen, Thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
He will master all these things before you can blink....you will wonder how the time so quickly flew! What a delightful poem, and the pic is too adorable. Quite pleased he is with himself!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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He will master all these things before you can blink....you will wonder how the time so quickly flew! What a delightful poem, and the pic is too adorable. Quite pleased he is with himself!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
