Should Droughts Deplete the Land
rhyming quatrains in 6//6/8/6129 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Loved the Sawyer quatrain-photos. A deep and meaningful message in the lightness of your poem. And the sea shall reclaim the land - all the predictions in the Bible are coming to pass and yet, and yet, His love is clear as glass.
Loved your poem. :-]
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Loved the Sawyer quatrain-photos. A deep and meaningful message in the lightness of your poem. And the sea shall reclaim the land - all the predictions in the Bible are coming to pass and yet, and yet, His love is clear as glass.
Loved your poem. :-]
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Kay, thank you so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Tegan1311
I think I've only given 6 stars for a poem once but this definitely deserves it. Your poem is short and easy to understand, but your metaphors are superb. They really pull the reader in and are deep, making you think. Wonderfully done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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I think I've only given 6 stars for a poem once but this definitely deserves it. Your poem is short and easy to understand, but your metaphors are superb. They really pull the reader in and are deep, making you think. Wonderfully done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Tegan, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
Your poems always run along so smoothly, are always a delightful read. Such serious questions for such a young lad.....what adorable pics!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Your poems always run along so smoothly, are always a delightful read. Such serious questions for such a young lad.....what adorable pics!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
I enjoy your poems and images of the next world leader. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I enjoy your poems and images of the next world leader. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Charlie :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I loved this so much, it's so upbeat and positive, it could be repeated in so many situations, I know your reason was your grandson and it was so lovely, when he grows up he will have the joy of all your poetry to keep with him , great poem ,
Andrew
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I loved this so much, it's so upbeat and positive, it could be repeated in so many situations, I know your reason was your grandson and it was so lovely, when he grows up he will have the joy of all your poetry to keep with him , great poem ,
Andrew
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: this poem is soft and tender and beautiful. And, I laughed when I heard Sawyer's introduction to supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. (My spelling) Now, that words is quite a mouth full for a two year old! Take care. Linda
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Brooke: this poem is soft and tender and beautiful. And, I laughed when I heard Sawyer's introduction to supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. (My spelling) Now, that words is quite a mouth full for a two year old! Take care. Linda
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Linda :-) I appreciate your generous rating and thoughtful review :-) Yesterday I asked him if he could say it, and he answered, No. LOL
Comment from krys123
Brooke, I enjoyed the simplicity of this writing in a way it made me not to questions of my desires and wishes in life but also realize what will there be if it goes missing things and I'm used to seeing. Because it is the simple things like one's smile that is enough to grant me all my wishes to come true. Your poem gives me such a feeling. Your writing is exceptional along with your tempo and metering A make your rhythm flow smoothly throughout your poem. While your rhyming is neither forced nor labored.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Brooke, I enjoyed the simplicity of this writing in a way it made me not to questions of my desires and wishes in life but also realize what will there be if it goes missing things and I'm used to seeing. Because it is the simple things like one's smile that is enough to grant me all my wishes to come true. Your poem gives me such a feeling. Your writing is exceptional along with your tempo and metering A make your rhythm flow smoothly throughout your poem. While your rhyming is neither forced nor labored.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Alex, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely and indeed welcome
Comment from Adri7enne
LOL! He's so cute, looking at his picture makes me chuckle. Such an expressive little face. Yeah, all of life takes on a special glow when there's a beloved little presence spreading joy in the background. Kids really brighten a life with their innocence and charm. Fun!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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LOL! He's so cute, looking at his picture makes me chuckle. Such an expressive little face. Yeah, all of life takes on a special glow when there's a beloved little presence spreading joy in the background. Kids really brighten a life with their innocence and charm. Fun!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Adrienne, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I'm sure you will! I love the exaggerated tragedies that you could endure just picturing Sawyer's smile. There's no way to put a price on that. :)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I'm sure you will! I love the exaggerated tragedies that you could endure just picturing Sawyer's smile. There's no way to put a price on that. :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Lol, thanks so much, Phyllis :-) Brooke
Comment from Leineco
;-) I'm definitely beginning to see a pattern here
there's just something about his adorable smile
that makes you write about your joy :-)
Very nice :-)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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;-) I'm definitely beginning to see a pattern here
there's just something about his adorable smile
that makes you write about your joy :-)
Very nice :-)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Leineco :-) Brooke
