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Should Droughts Deplete the Land

rhyming quatrains in 6//6/8/6

129 total reviews 
Comment from marijmd
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well my state is in quite a drought this year - makes you think though about what is happening on our planet
I know your poem was one of love and having no regrets - it just gave me pause

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    Thank you, marijmd, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
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This poem seems to say that we should take it one day at a time. If time that won't resume, so be it. As long as you did what you could. That's all that matters. In the end, very upbeat. Thanks for sharing. Les

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    Les, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from DALLAS01
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Said like a devoted grandma. I feel the same way. Being a grandmother is a blessing everyone should have the privilege of experiencing.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    Dallas, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
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I'm running out of comments to make about your poetry, Brooke, except to wonder - once again - how you keep doing it and doing it so well.

Lovely!

Sonali

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Sonali, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello adewpearl, Brooke, There are few joys greater than the joy of child, especially a grandchild. Another uplifting poem filled with happiness. I especially liked:

I won't bemoan my fate,
nor life shall I revile,
for I will always have the joy
I've found within your smile

(Indeed)

Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Thank you, LateBloomer, for your thoughtful review. I always appreciate your feedback :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
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A wonderful way to describe the joy and happiness that can be brought to one by something as simple as a smile from someone we love. It can brighten our whole day and help us forget our troubles.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Ward, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janie King
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He is just one of the most precious gifts of a darling sent from heaven by God. I love the poem too. You and his parents are very blessed. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
    Thank you, Janie, for your thoughtful review. I appreciate your reviewing when you are so busy :-) Brooke
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Lovely use of Sawyer's photo (as always)and well penned poem about him. Just love your clever use of creative wording... Loved it. Keep 'em coming, Deb

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
    Deb, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from ElegantButler
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It is always good to remember that no matter how dry the land may become, when laughter comes, the mirth is often so strong that it waters the heart with tears of joy.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thanks so much, Elegant Butler :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
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thank you so much brooke, i'm left season! i love the imagery found and the task is over:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke