The Caterpillar Has to Crawl
a quatern with modified repeating lines141 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Entertaining version of the "you gotta learn to crawl before you can walk" theme :-) Loved wooly version of a worm! (somehow, in S2L4 I wanted plain to be palm - LOL)
Nice job Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Entertaining version of the "you gotta learn to crawl before you can walk" theme :-) Loved wooly version of a worm! (somehow, in S2L4 I wanted plain to be palm - LOL)
Nice job Brooke :-)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Leineco, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Goo poem with a great picture of the Caterpillar. Edward flow on rhyming as usual, make this a very easy form to understand. I guess in essence, we all have to crawl before we can fly.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Goo poem with a great picture of the Caterpillar. Edward flow on rhyming as usual, make this a very easy form to understand. I guess in essence, we all have to crawl before we can fly.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you, GWinterwin, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I know I'm behind, but you also seem to be on a writing roll--you're making it harder to ever catch up! I'm wondering what's next in the creepy, crawly series... I enjoyed your rhymed couplets and modified repeats plus use of alliteration. Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I know I'm behind, but you also seem to be on a writing roll--you're making it harder to ever catch up! I'm wondering what's next in the creepy, crawly series... I enjoyed your rhymed couplets and modified repeats plus use of alliteration. Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Joan :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
Th carterpillar has to crawl,indeed it is an amazing kind of worm that might change into a beautiful butterfly,
that's very lovely poem, nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Th carterpillar has to crawl,indeed it is an amazing kind of worm that might change into a beautiful butterfly,
that's very lovely poem, nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is a poem that speaks of truth. I never really thought about it like this. We can learn to soar where we are in life and by what we have. Great poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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This is a poem that speaks of truth. I never really thought about it like this. We can learn to soar where we are in life and by what we have. Great poem.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Bobby Jo, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from fairy77
This is gorgeous and so enjoyable and fun. A treat are butterflies and caterpillars well not so much. I liked it and felt you did a great job!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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This is gorgeous and so enjoyable and fun. A treat are butterflies and caterpillars well not so much. I liked it and felt you did a great job!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Beth, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from artisart4u
A nice poem about metamorphosis or about maturing- you have crawl before you can walk.
It rhymes very well and the butterfly is so cute.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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A nice poem about metamorphosis or about maturing- you have crawl before you can walk.
It rhymes very well and the butterfly is so cute.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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artisart4u - thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with will/hill...reach/peach. Good alliteration with caterpillar/crawl...wooly/worm...wriggles/will...pear/plumpest/peach...tree/tall...become/butterfly...spacious/sky. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with will/hill...reach/peach. Good alliteration with caterpillar/crawl...wooly/worm...wriggles/will...pear/plumpest/peach...tree/tall...become/butterfly...spacious/sky. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Righteous Riter :-) Brooke
Comment from DanielEkine
In my deduction, life takes step by step. We have to crawl before flying. Every queen was once a little princess. Great insight this poem breathes forth. Great job by the renowned author. Good use of SPAG and rhyme. Exceptional work.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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In my deduction, life takes step by step. We have to crawl before flying. Every queen was once a little princess. Great insight this poem breathes forth. Great job by the renowned author. Good use of SPAG and rhyme. Exceptional work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Daniel, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ArtGal
Brooke, I have to say that this caterpillar is actually cute compared to a worm, lol. I would never use him for bait, especially knowing he will become a butterfly. I wonder, do you know exactly how long that takes? You always have me thinking and I love it. And of course loved all of your wording in this great poem. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Brooke, I have to say that this caterpillar is actually cute compared to a worm, lol. I would never use him for bait, especially knowing he will become a butterfly. I wonder, do you know exactly how long that takes? You always have me thinking and I love it. And of course loved all of your wording in this great poem. . .Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Sharon, for your thoughtful response to this poem. Nope, don't know how long the metamorphosis process takes. It's one of those things I'm sure I used to know and have now forgotten LOL Brooke
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That is the process of growing older, lol!!!
