A Ladybug of Several Dots
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Comment from Eliane Rabello
Wow! This is so creative and with such colorful and sweet words, Brooke! I love ladybugs, and here you are managing to make the subject more special. I loved this: "for who can choose a single one when spots aplenty catch the sun?" At times when I review your work, it feels like reading you for the first time all over again. Like seeing it with the same sense of awe as the first time. Now, please, allow me. You know what a pain in the neck I am, so...a bit of the so common harassment, if I may. If you've made it here for such a long time already, imagine what you'll do in the big pond. Fight all you want, but you WILL take off. And soon. Mark my words and save an autograph for a longtime fan, please. Love your work, coach! :)
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Wow! This is so creative and with such colorful and sweet words, Brooke! I love ladybugs, and here you are managing to make the subject more special. I loved this: "for who can choose a single one when spots aplenty catch the sun?" At times when I review your work, it feels like reading you for the first time all over again. Like seeing it with the same sense of awe as the first time. Now, please, allow me. You know what a pain in the neck I am, so...a bit of the so common harassment, if I may. If you've made it here for such a long time already, imagine what you'll do in the big pond. Fight all you want, but you WILL take off. And soon. Mark my words and save an autograph for a longtime fan, please. Love your work, coach! :)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Thank you so very very much, my encouraging and generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from fairy77
haha that was precious and very adorable. I'm sure you'll make a wonderful children's book:)Well done with all these rhymes and it's fun spin:)beth hugs.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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haha that was precious and very adorable. I'm sure you'll make a wonderful children's book:)Well done with all these rhymes and it's fun spin:)beth hugs.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Beth :-) Brooke
Comment from Joy Graham
Good quatrain story of a lady bug and her several dots :) We had a non-rainy day yesterday and a crazy looking bug landed near me. I named him Herman and vowed to like his non-lovely looks :) Bugs need love too!!?
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Good quatrain story of a lady bug and her several dots :) We had a non-rainy day yesterday and a crazy looking bug landed near me. I named him Herman and vowed to like his non-lovely looks :) Bugs need love too!!?
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Joy. I hope you and Herman are enjoying life together. LOL Brooke
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Herman left me before I could get hysterical.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - I think kids would love this poem. Mine were always fascinated with lady bugs too. Lovely imagery, easy words to read for them and leaves a smile.... Till I remember those orange lady bugs with less dots and they bite - ouch.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Dear Brooke - I think kids would love this poem. Mine were always fascinated with lady bugs too. Lovely imagery, easy words to read for them and leaves a smile.... Till I remember those orange lady bugs with less dots and they bite - ouch.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Maureen :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
D is for dots. This is a brilliant use of repetition, a device that children enjoy. I can visualize this as part of an alphabet book. The photo is a superb study of the bug too.
Pete
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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D is for dots. This is a brilliant use of repetition, a device that children enjoy. I can visualize this as part of an alphabet book. The photo is a superb study of the bug too.
Pete
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Pete, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
The great close up picture of the Ladybug provides great imagery for us as we read about the ladybug of several dots.
Then your descriptive words take us on her journey as she "ambles" along searching for just the right "spot" in the sun. Nice job, Brooke. 8-)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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The great close up picture of the Ladybug provides great imagery for us as we read about the ladybug of several dots.
Then your descriptive words take us on her journey as she "ambles" along searching for just the right "spot" in the sun. Nice job, Brooke. 8-)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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boxergirl, thank you for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this ...and it would make a beautiful picture book
I am partial to these cute as a bug, bugs
Well done again Brooke...I like your lady bug with spots, lots and lots
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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I love this ...and it would make a beautiful picture book
I am partial to these cute as a bug, bugs
Well done again Brooke...I like your lady bug with spots, lots and lots
God bless
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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kiwijenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
HI Brooke, very sweet and nicely written...next time I see one I'll be trying to count it's dots...you know I love it...very well written...and a great picture...Luff Linda xoox
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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HI Brooke, very sweet and nicely written...next time I see one I'll be trying to count it's dots...you know I love it...very well written...and a great picture...Luff Linda xoox
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are more than welcome...xxoo have a great day you...
Comment from evilynne
I don't think that I reviewed this one, yet. Ladybugs are my favorite bugs. Your poem describes their adventures in such fantastically descriptive language. And I do believe that they are good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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I don't think that I reviewed this one, yet. Ladybugs are my favorite bugs. Your poem describes their adventures in such fantastically descriptive language. And I do believe that they are good luck!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Ev, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from flylikeaneagle
19 June 2014
Adewpearl: Great, terrific descriptions of the ladybug's favorite spots to relax. I like how the poem goes down from line to line. I like how you repeated sun, ambled and spots. I learn a lot from your writings.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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19 June 2014
Adewpearl: Great, terrific descriptions of the ladybug's favorite spots to relax. I like how the poem goes down from line to line. I like how you repeated sun, ambled and spots. I learn a lot from your writings.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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flylikeaneagle, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
