Comment from mroby731

Excellent

I really love this work. You are so able to capture emotions in a deeply felt manner. Right now this is exactly how I feel but I don't have the 'bare hands to gently dry my tears.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from fly4hi

Excellent

A very beautiful and poignant write about
two souls finding each other. One of your best
writes lately. Very well done, Pili. fly

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from DySaintDrama

Excellent

Pili, you definitely are the current master of smooth flowing, imagery laden free verse. As I said before, your poems have the physical layout of some of Writermom's older work. Keep writing. Jeff

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from meringue

Excellent

Dear Pulbul, I meant:
A sudden scream (Depth/deep is not usd twice in this way)
escaped
from
the depths
of your being.

and not

A sudden
scream
escaped
suddenly,
from
the depths
of your being.Here, sudden is repeated now.....

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a lovely free-verse poem Pili. It flows so gently and the imagery is wonderful, for example, "the winds of attraction in the sadness of your eyes." Superb.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from Genuine Suede

Excellent

I was able to get inside your heart as I read this poem. What a rich compliment that is to be able to say that. I do wish you the very best in the unfolding of this relationship. Bliss is in the air. :0)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from mfwilkie

Excellent

Nice voice in this, Pili. Full of compassion.
A couple of thoughts on the words.
as(and) a slim
light
commenced(began) - is softer than commence, like the voice in the poem.
to shine.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from Srinivasan

Excellent

It's emotional and highly philosophical.

In a symbolic manner, the poet has presented various periods in life time, where the persona and the partner meet, share thoughts, find the support from the other, take solace in the company of night time, that may suggest the solitude and face life together.

The poem is conceived in shorter lines and in a brief manner to depict the pleasure of friendship and love.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2005

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hi,
Ahhhhhhh... I just reviewed another new one by you and both seem to compliment each other. This is one that belongs on a Hallmark card:-) Awesome read Miss P.... Buddy

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2005

Comment from Thomas Raine

Excellent

The imagery in this hit me hard, and I ahd to read the poem again to asborb all you had written. This is such a powerful piece, and I love the following lines:

With bare hands
I gently
dried
the tears
from your soul.

Great job!

- TR

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2005