Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Creation Sleeps"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Bobby Jo
This picture is breathtaking, yet it is not heaven. I believe when I no longer wake to earth, that heaven will be more breathtaking.
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This picture is breathtaking, yet it is not heaven. I believe when I no longer wake to earth, that heaven will be more breathtaking.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Sueswrite
Beautiful direct message and the perfect visual compliment. Even just a few words can speak of such importance and strength of its powerful message. Superb! Best of luck! You are a great writer.
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Beautiful direct message and the perfect visual compliment. Even just a few words can speak of such importance and strength of its powerful message. Superb! Best of luck! You are a great writer.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, deepwater, I like this little couplet asking the question of eternity. I enjoyed reading it. excellent question asked and the picture is great
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this is very well written, deepwater, I like this little couplet asking the question of eternity. I enjoyed reading it. excellent question asked and the picture is great
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from DanielEkine
The author gives us a reason to be grateful and thankful for every moment we have in life. Very thought-provoking. A poem that pierces through its reader's heart. Exceptional work. The artwork is breathtaking and deserving.
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The author gives us a reason to be grateful and thankful for every moment we have in life. Very thought-provoking. A poem that pierces through its reader's heart. Exceptional work. The artwork is breathtaking and deserving.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from judester
This is a deep little poem. In Tanzania, when they write the obituaries, they don't say born and died, they say sunrise and sunset. Your words made me think of that, good night, judester
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This is a deep little poem. In Tanzania, when they write the obituaries, they don't say born and died, they say sunrise and sunset. Your words made me think of that, good night, judester
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from victor 66
There is here and there is now. "Tomorrow is promised to no one." Tomorrow is maybe lucky, maybe not lucky. Who really knows. Beyond, perhaps there is nothing, perhaps there is everything. Aren't you curious as well? Always thought provoking, GW. Best wishes.
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There is here and there is now. "Tomorrow is promised to no one." Tomorrow is maybe lucky, maybe not lucky. Who really knows. Beyond, perhaps there is nothing, perhaps there is everything. Aren't you curious as well? Always thought provoking, GW. Best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from bossladyone
The prose is beautiful. The picture that you put with is adds to the sensuality of the piece. The question asked is one that we all come to a point in life and ask. I love that you put something for us to consider, the beauty of creation and how much time we have to enjoy it. Thank you for sharing
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The prose is beautiful. The picture that you put with is adds to the sensuality of the piece. The question asked is one that we all come to a point in life and ask. I love that you put something for us to consider, the beauty of creation and how much time we have to enjoy it. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
A very thought provoking question as the "end times" are upon us. But as for me I would rather be sure that my soul is in right standing with God.
Charlene
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A very thought provoking question as the "end times" are upon us. But as for me I would rather be sure that my soul is in right standing with God.
Charlene
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Such an interesting short poem.
The last look at perfection, there is nothing that beats a sunset. And will we awake? God willing, and if not, after death the judgement. Then eternity
Well done,
Carolyn
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Such an interesting short poem.
The last look at perfection, there is nothing that beats a sunset. And will we awake? God willing, and if not, after death the judgement. Then eternity
Well done,
Carolyn
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I guess that's a question we all can ask every night before we go to sleep but if we live each day like our last we'll have no regrets either way. Great job
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I guess that's a question we all can ask every night before we go to sleep but if we live each day like our last we'll have no regrets either way. Great job
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
