Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Creation Sleeps"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Angel Debbie
The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
Either way life goes their will be perfection!
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The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals,
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
Either way life goes their will be perfection!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Carmanie Bhatti
oh my ! Absolutely beautiful ! I believe the photographer has chosen a beautiful picture to justify the piece of poetry. It's gorgeous. I highly appreciate the poem which is full of brevity and meaning and which conveys the message that we are in the hands of God. There is a deep connection between the author's notes and the poem ! There's a hidden echo in the poet's voice that asks us to be ready either for a new morning or to sleep a eternal sleep so that we wake up when it's time for eternity. Highly recommended for those who are on a journey of knowledge ! WELL DONE !
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oh my ! Absolutely beautiful ! I believe the photographer has chosen a beautiful picture to justify the piece of poetry. It's gorgeous. I highly appreciate the poem which is full of brevity and meaning and which conveys the message that we are in the hands of God. There is a deep connection between the author's notes and the poem ! There's a hidden echo in the poet's voice that asks us to be ready either for a new morning or to sleep a eternal sleep so that we wake up when it's time for eternity. Highly recommended for those who are on a journey of knowledge ! WELL DONE !
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from GeorgieBoy
I loved the profound message. It will stick in my memory each time I watch a sunset. The picture is very apt and suits the prose. The sunset and the darkness in the picture is a contrast that is shared in your words. Well done!
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I loved the profound message. It will stick in my memory each time I watch a sunset. The picture is very apt and suits the prose. The sunset and the darkness in the picture is a contrast that is shared in your words. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Just2Write
The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals[,] - (Should be a dash, colon or period at this full stop)
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
Good question. Each of us hopes we know the answer.
Rose.
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The last look at perfection through tired eyes of pure mortals[,] - (Should be a dash, colon or period at this full stop)
Will we awake to see the rising of the sun or sleep for eternity?
Good question. Each of us hopes we know the answer.
Rose.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from L.M.Mullins
Nice chapter to your book. Your piece is short and to the point, and yet it causes the reader to reflect on both the past, present and future. Great picture.
LM
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Nice chapter to your book. Your piece is short and to the point, and yet it causes the reader to reflect on both the past, present and future. Great picture.
LM
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from mermaids
Your two lines are a poetic mouthful,just fun to pronounce and read out loud. Through tired of pure mortals adds to the strength of the poem and has a spiritual feel.
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Your two lines are a poetic mouthful,just fun to pronounce and read out loud. Through tired of pure mortals adds to the strength of the poem and has a spiritual feel.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Alan K Pease
A lot of wisdom in twenty five words spoken on a rising or setting sun with a eternity of possibilities to choose from if we pursue those choices he lays before us or perish.
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A lot of wisdom in twenty five words spoken on a rising or setting sun with a eternity of possibilities to choose from if we pursue those choices he lays before us or perish.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from lappmellott
I loved your poem, even though it was very short. The photograph you chose to accompany it is so striking. I loved it, but then I have this thing with the sky. I don't think we stop and take the time to just look up and see God's glory.
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I loved your poem, even though it was very short. The photograph you chose to accompany it is so striking. I loved it, but then I have this thing with the sky. I don't think we stop and take the time to just look up and see God's glory.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from poetbear
Stunning photo.
You make the utmost of everyday.
Celebrate what to others might e small.
You just dance for the sake of it.
Moving write.
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Stunning photo.
You make the utmost of everyday.
Celebrate what to others might e small.
You just dance for the sake of it.
Moving write.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Eternal Muse
Quite a dilemma, really. But interestingly put. I would love to know the answer to that question.
A great artistic presentation - love that sunset!!
Thank you for sharing this with us, GW, I enjoyed it.
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Quite a dilemma, really. But interestingly put. I would love to know the answer to that question.
A great artistic presentation - love that sunset!!
Thank you for sharing this with us, GW, I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
