Bowing to Reality
who is more real - creator or created?31 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is very well written and an interesting read. I went through it twice and cannot seem to find the sentence that was supposed to be used in the dialog within the story. I am sure it is there somewhere even if I keep missing it for some reason. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
  |
This is very well written and an interesting read. I went through it twice and cannot seem to find the sentence that was supposed to be used in the dialog within the story. I am sure it is there somewhere even if I keep missing it for some reason. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
-
Thank you, Angel - I'm so glad you liked it :-). I've just double checked and it's definitely there - In the penultimate scene. Was best to be sure though because, in the past, I have unwittingly edited out a required sentence in my second draft!
Mike
-
I have done that too ... makes you want to kick yourself down the street and back LOL.
