As Fragile is the Love
a pantoum sonnet - see contest rules124 total reviews
Comment from Tegan1311
A very well done poem. Your words flowed well and it was clear and easy to understand. I like that your poem is deep and a little sad (though not too sad). Lots of emotion.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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A very well done poem. Your words flowed well and it was clear and easy to understand. I like that your poem is deep and a little sad (though not too sad). Lots of emotion.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Tegan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from zanya
The Pantoum is an interesting format -intricate and concise to convey and emphasise the 'message'- love will out and find expression 'I can't refuse to follow love's design'- I love the notion of the inevitability of Love! Such a cute pic
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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The Pantoum is an interesting format -intricate and concise to convey and emphasise the 'message'- love will out and find expression 'I can't refuse to follow love's design'- I love the notion of the inevitability of Love! Such a cute pic
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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zanya, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful review and generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from deepwater
adewpearl you have a great way with words and this is one more to show, your poem has all the requirements of a hit
thanks for writing.
Gary
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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adewpearl you have a great way with words and this is one more to show, your poem has all the requirements of a hit
thanks for writing.
Gary
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Gary, thank you so much for your gracious comments and generous ratings :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Brooke,
This was a very well-executed pantome sonnet. Nice IP throughout and a compelling message. A ladies' man? Looks like I've got some competition:) All the best--Ted
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Dear Brooke,
This was a very well-executed pantome sonnet. Nice IP throughout and a compelling message. A ladies' man? Looks like I've got some competition:) All the best--Ted
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Ted, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
Whata sweet poem. Trust and giving one's heart are very basic acts that are sometimes extremely hard to do. Great flow to this. Liked the emotional appeal in this. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Whata sweet poem. Trust and giving one's heart are very basic acts that are sometimes extremely hard to do. Great flow to this. Liked the emotional appeal in this. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Gretchen, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
It is in this form that I find the most exquisite music when a poet as fine as you are composes...my sigh is one of pure joy in reading this beauty! THIS is romance at its best!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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It is in this form that I find the most exquisite music when a poet as fine as you are composes...my sigh is one of pure joy in reading this beauty! THIS is romance at its best!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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I am honored by your comments, Dawn. Thank you so much for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Donya Quijote
This was sweet. Still in the philosophizing mood I see. You are absolutely right we can not avoid love and it conquer even the most resistant heart. Lovely photo goes well with poem. Gentle, contemplative tone. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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This was sweet. Still in the philosophizing mood I see. You are absolutely right we can not avoid love and it conquer even the most resistant heart. Lovely photo goes well with poem. Gentle, contemplative tone. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Donya :-) Brooke
Comment from thedreampeddler
Absolutely a great work of art here.
I usually turn my nose up to the whole over done love theme
but I'm glad i gave this one a chance.
You nailed it.
thedreampeddler
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Absolutely a great work of art here.
I usually turn my nose up to the whole over done love theme
but I'm glad i gave this one a chance.
You nailed it.
thedreampeddler
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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thedreampeddler, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
This a beautiful heartfelt poem. Even though you used your two favorite models to illustrate, this is a poem that I am sure will resonate with all or at least most of the adults who read it. It most certainly touched my heart to its very core. This is wonderful work. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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This a beautiful heartfelt poem. Even though you used your two favorite models to illustrate, this is a poem that I am sure will resonate with all or at least most of the adults who read it. It most certainly touched my heart to its very core. This is wonderful work. Congratulations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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nomi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHHHHHHHHHHH, I enjoyed reading your very strong contest entry. It's a fun poem and love is fragile and often we're afraid to entrust it to others. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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AHHHHHHHHHHH, I enjoyed reading your very strong contest entry. It's a fun poem and love is fragile and often we're afraid to entrust it to others. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
