Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a wonderful pantoum to read out loud . It is full of passionate feeling and depth of emotion. The rhyme and rhythm are excellent. What a delight

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014

RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from rod007

Excellent

This piece very vividly portrays a powerful truth, that love has to be 'entrusted and consigned." A compelling vision in words of the force of love. I hope I interpreted correctly the deep message in this great poem. Well done, Brooke.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014

Thank you so very much, Rod, for a most thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

This is a another of your well written positive messages in poetic verve. This poem speaks to love and trusting in another. It is well written in that guise and has good poetic parlance in its thoughts and measures. I enjoyed partaking of this excellent piece of poetic art... John

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014

John, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Ahhhh.....there are tears in my eyes. This is full of emotion and feelings. For hearts will wither if they're not consigned is a marvelous line,reminds me of those looking for love and feeling lonely. This is a challenging form to write and I admire your ability to create a poem that flows so smooth and has much meaning.

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014

Thank you so very much, Elaine :-) Brooke