As Fragile is the Love
a pantoum sonnet - see contest rules124 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brooke - This is perfect in both Sonnet form and as a Pantoum - the content is good - a beautifully loving message. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke - This is perfect in both Sonnet form and as a Pantoum - the content is good - a beautifully loving message. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: beautiful Pantoum poem. I'm really only recently beginning to appreciate these seemingly delicate pieces of poetry. And, I sure that it is your work which is inspiring me. Very nice work and picture. Linda
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Brooke: beautiful Pantoum poem. I'm really only recently beginning to appreciate these seemingly delicate pieces of poetry. And, I sure that it is your work which is inspiring me. Very nice work and picture. Linda
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thank you so very much, Linda. I'm thrilled you are growing in your appreciation of form poetry, which I truly love. I appreciate your generous sixth star. :-) Brooke
Comment from ishita90
Really a little chance is left to live happily wen love is gone.. love, trust have become fragile and everyone is not made to accept it. loved this piece! Would like to read more from your end..!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Really a little chance is left to live happily wen love is gone.. love, trust have become fragile and everyone is not made to accept it. loved this piece! Would like to read more from your end..!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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ishita, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
A beautiful phantoun sonnet, Brooke, a magnificent tribute to love you pay here, if there wasn't love abroad in the earth we would all shrivel up and die, I concur with all you say! Nice ababcc rhyming with proximate, even meter! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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A beautiful phantoun sonnet, Brooke, a magnificent tribute to love you pay here, if there wasn't love abroad in the earth we would all shrivel up and die, I concur with all you say! Nice ababcc rhyming with proximate, even meter! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Hi Brooke. That is a delightful picture of Sawyer and Chloe.
You have penned a perfect pantoum sonnet with a lovely message
and presentation. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke. That is a delightful picture of Sawyer and Chloe.
You have penned a perfect pantoum sonnet with a lovely message
and presentation. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
I can't refuse to follow love's design - what an interesting line - so often the mots tragic of tales this refusal is what happens. We love but tell our selves it is not real or distrust that love - if only it were as simple as following the feeling!
:) Maria
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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I can't refuse to follow love's design - what an interesting line - so often the mots tragic of tales this refusal is what happens. We love but tell our selves it is not real or distrust that love - if only it were as simple as following the feeling!
:) Maria
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Maria, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
As Fragile as the love, lovely picture, that's a beautiful
Sonnet poem. I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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As Fragile as the love, lovely picture, that's a beautiful
Sonnet poem. I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest.God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Pantoum sonnet... why not? And this is superb, as usual. You've illustrated it with those adorable kids, yet it suits adults as a romantic sonnet. :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Pantoum sonnet... why not? And this is superb, as usual. You've illustrated it with those adorable kids, yet it suits adults as a romantic sonnet. :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Phyllis, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
One of my favorite forms, Brooke. I love the geometric
repetition. It's like looking at an idea in the round.
Read one at a time, your verses hold together.
But read as you intend, they build.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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One of my favorite forms, Brooke. I love the geometric
repetition. It's like looking at an idea in the round.
Read one at a time, your verses hold together.
But read as you intend, they build.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014
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Lee, thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
I just love the pantoum sonnet with it beautiful repeating lines. This is such a lovely and heart warming poem about a genuine love between two soul-mates. Superb work with this one and a precious photo to go with it.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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I just love the pantoum sonnet with it beautiful repeating lines. This is such a lovely and heart warming poem about a genuine love between two soul-mates. Superb work with this one and a precious photo to go with it.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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Valerie, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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I just figured out the draw-back to being the number one poet on this site. I was looking at some of your poems the other day and noticed the awesome number of reviews you often get...this one got 106. I don't see how there are enough hours in the day to respond to all of them!!!! And that is just one poem...lol
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I do get behind! A few times I've finally cleared the count when I was just ridiculously behind.
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Plus, you even find time to de-spag my charming posts...you are amazing too.
