As Fragile is the Love
a pantoum sonnet - see contest rules124 total reviews
Comment from Just2Write
Now, how did I miss this gem? It is a charming Pantoum Sonnet - and a love sonnet at that.
Graceful lines that flow so well and are standard stock from your talented soul.
Loved the pairing of picture and poem. It adds a touch of innocence to love. Refreshingly endearing.
As usual, not a thing to fix or change.
Rose.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Now, how did I miss this gem? It is a charming Pantoum Sonnet - and a love sonnet at that.
Graceful lines that flow so well and are standard stock from your talented soul.
Loved the pairing of picture and poem. It adds a touch of innocence to love. Refreshingly endearing.
As usual, not a thing to fix or change.
Rose.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Thank you so very much, Rose :-) I appreciate your encouragement. Brooke
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Hi Brooke,
ya see, I knew you'd come up with a terrific contest entry. :)with great rhyme, meter, and form. It flows smoothly throughout and never seems forced aided by your abundant enjambment. The pursuit of love can make one do crazy things a times. Good luck.
All the best,
Rodger
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
ya see, I knew you'd come up with a terrific contest entry. :)with great rhyme, meter, and form. It flows smoothly throughout and never seems forced aided by your abundant enjambment. The pursuit of love can make one do crazy things a times. Good luck.
All the best,
Rodger
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Rodger, thank you so much for your encouragement and generosity. You sure were more certain I would come up with a poem than I was. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
Well done and beautiful, Brooke. I am behind in my reviewing. Just been busy. I love the picture. It goes right along with the poem. MIss Sally
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Well done and beautiful, Brooke. I am behind in my reviewing. Just been busy. I love the picture. It goes right along with the poem. MIss Sally
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Miss Sally, I appreciate your gracious and thoughtful reviews today :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
Very well crafted romantic love sonnet in Pantoum format. It flows seamlessly within the well chosen repeating phrases that linger and drift along like cresting waves of words. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Very well crafted romantic love sonnet in Pantoum format. It flows seamlessly within the well chosen repeating phrases that linger and drift along like cresting waves of words. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Treischel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
A jewel, and polished to perfection. Intellectual and emotional declaration of love in perfect Pantoum format. I wish you the best of luck. Kenny
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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A jewel, and polished to perfection. Intellectual and emotional declaration of love in perfect Pantoum format. I wish you the best of luck. Kenny
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from 9999pool
I am truly lost in love with you. Though fragile it may be, I will surely be very sad when you are gone. Love's design had taken a grip on me. Though I am not bold about love's design, I feel love has trapped me in a place with no escape from the clutches of your love.
Brilliant write and well expressed.
Good luck.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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I am truly lost in love with you. Though fragile it may be, I will surely be very sad when you are gone. Love's design had taken a grip on me. Though I am not bold about love's design, I feel love has trapped me in a place with no escape from the clutches of your love.
Brilliant write and well expressed.
Good luck.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2014
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Ritchie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Hi Brooke,
Enjoyed this breezy fun read about love, smiles. Made me think about our puppy love. :))
Ritchie.
Comment from Bobby Jo
As fragile is the love I trust to you, there is no other course I can pursue. I love this. Love is fragile, yet it is our heart that leads the way.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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As fragile is the love I trust to you, there is no other course I can pursue. I love this. Love is fragile, yet it is our heart that leads the way.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Bobby Jo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from michaelcahill
Goodness. This is so good that I don't notice that the lines are repeating. So, that leaves me at a loss for words!! The meaning changes moving forward to an excellent conclusion. It's a great sonnet and as a bonus you did all kinds of fancy stuff too!! mikey
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Goodness. This is so good that I don't notice that the lines are repeating. So, that leaves me at a loss for words!! The meaning changes moving forward to an excellent conclusion. It's a great sonnet and as a bonus you did all kinds of fancy stuff too!! mikey
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Mikey :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
What a beautiful poem and an exceptional contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
The picture of those two beautiful children is so perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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What a beautiful poem and an exceptional contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
The picture of those two beautiful children is so perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Cajungirl, thanks so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
The cute picture of Sawyer and his pal could not have been better staged! If he had your words, Sawyer would sing them to the skies. I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats in this rhythmic, love sonnet. Best wishes in the contest with this splendid Pantoum- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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The cute picture of Sawyer and his pal could not have been better staged! If he had your words, Sawyer would sing them to the skies. I enjoyed your rhymes and repeats in this rhythmic, love sonnet. Best wishes in the contest with this splendid Pantoum- Joan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Joan - Miranda is always observing them and ready to snap away :-) Brooke
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She had great timing with this shot! :) -Joan
