One Wish
A Boy with a Favor From God25 total reviews
Comment from janalma
This brought tears to my eyes. I wish there were no sad and unhappy, mistreated kids in this world. Ain't gonna' happen, I know. I very much like the way your sentences run on. It's called something in poetry but I can't remember what. This is a sad but very well penned poem. No awkward phrases here! I'm not a qualified critic, but very much liked this style.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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This brought tears to my eyes. I wish there were no sad and unhappy, mistreated kids in this world. Ain't gonna' happen, I know. I very much like the way your sentences run on. It's called something in poetry but I can't remember what. This is a sad but very well penned poem. No awkward phrases here! I'm not a qualified critic, but very much liked this style.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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You have made my day a very happy one. Thank you for your kindness.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written poem of despair seeking relief. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very emotional read. Good imagery.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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This is very well written poem of despair seeking relief. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very emotional read. Good imagery.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Hi C, Blessings and big thank you for your comments.
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You're welcome, LL Charlie
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"Just a boy's wish was all Rylan wanted. Now the door to his life had a key." - This is a thoroughly inspiring summation. This is a beautifully constructed and uplifting piece. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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"Just a boy's wish was all Rylan wanted. Now the door to his life had a key." - This is a thoroughly inspiring summation. This is a beautifully constructed and uplifting piece. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Dear friend, You made me smile...and I thank you so very much.
Comment from the49ergrl
I found this poem heartbreaking and uplifting at the same time. I could picture the boy and his tears and his sadness. I could also picture the light in his face upon seeing the magical rainbow. Well done! Thank you for sharing your work.
~ EJ
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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I found this poem heartbreaking and uplifting at the same time. I could picture the boy and his tears and his sadness. I could also picture the light in his face upon seeing the magical rainbow. Well done! Thank you for sharing your work.
~ EJ
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thank YOU for reading it and commenting. I appreciate all of your words.
Comment from chasennov
"One Wish" I enjoyed reading this poem you have created here, and I thought your formulation was quite neat and centred. Well done.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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"One Wish" I enjoyed reading this poem you have created here, and I thought your formulation was quite neat and centred. Well done.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Blessings and my thanks for your generous words.
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You are most welcome.
