Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I wonder who the special person is?
A nice catchy write, the repeating first line adding to the ambiance that points to lyrics of a song.

WE all love to listen or read such as it gives way to human kindness and understanding.
Good write, Dr Dip.
Enjoyed the song, though I know not the tune.
Best wishes,
RGstar

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014

thanks RG for your warm comments much appreciated

dip

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

This is a lovely poem/song. I do like the message -- that your loved one allows you to roam and this welcomes you back. Very sweet. Your poem has a very nice flow. Is 'Sentimental dip' your signature? :) Being a sentimental person is a good thing, I believe. Take care. Alana

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014

Thanks Ace your comments are positive and appreciated

dip is my nick name and has been since school a bastardization of my last name De Pena
it is also my signature pen name dip when writing anything

dip

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

A love song of coming home "Back home in your arms" This is a lovely song lyrics poem which I enjoyed very much. I'm just sorry I don't have a guitar. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2014

thanks so much Chase, for your warm and positive comments it heartens me to continue to write

dip

reply by chasennov on 19-Jun-2014

You are most welcome, Dip.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

You are so generous...I wish I was musical but I am not....
I love this song...and the refrain...I see it as a country song...heavy rock wouldn't do....definitely country.....well done
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014

Thanks Jenny, really appreciate you comment and input

dip

Comment from missjosi

Excellent

Great poem here.... no matter how far we may go........ coming home is always the best feeling... especially to those we love.... something that will resonate on in most peoples hearts well done :)

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014

thanks josi your comments are much appreciated

dip

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Empty arms does not encourage a loving relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an enticing read.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2014

Thanks so much c, your comments are always supporting and positive and for that I am forever grateful.

dip

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hey Dip,

This would make for a great song. However, my musicality is as good as my stick people in art - they look like deformed aliens!!

I do hope someone does give it a go.

Well done.

Cheers &
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014

thanks jax much appreciated

dip

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

What fun, Dr. D! I can certainly hear this one accompanied by a guitar, slightly C&W style (but not cheesy) ... Glen Campbell eat your heart out!
:)S

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014

Thanks visionary..The witchitore linesman has got nothing on this ya reckon? lol

dip

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

This is a well written song with a good chorus in it. Take a little guitar, some drums and a bass and maybe an organ as well. Then you can make the music for the words here. I enjoyed reading this well written poetic song fest... John

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014

THANKYOU jOHN YOUR COMMENTS AND THOUGHTS ARE MUCH APPRECIATED

sorry about shouting lol bloody caps lock gets stuck on this keyboard

dip

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is lovely and filled with the potential for music. I may give it a go LOL. Happy to see you are home safely. This is wonderfully constructed and just lifts the reader up in your wave of emotion in the reading. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014

wow I am so rapt with your comment Mystic you certainly have made my day I have just got to do a bit of fine tuning so to speak on a couple of lines but it will make no difference

dip