I'm Jivin' to Joy
a poem in rhyming couplets148 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Live out loud. Dance to your beat, and above all else, have fun, enjoy life and love yourself. That is what I hear when I read your poem. Wonderful advice and worth repeating.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
Live out loud. Dance to your beat, and above all else, have fun, enjoy life and love yourself. That is what I hear when I read your poem. Wonderful advice and worth repeating.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
HI Brooke: beautiful again! Fun and frolic with upbeat enthusiasm and great spirit. As always, great photo to pull it all together in one really 'jazzy' work! Vance
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
HI Brooke: beautiful again! Fun and frolic with upbeat enthusiasm and great spirit. As always, great photo to pull it all together in one really 'jazzy' work! Vance
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Vance, for your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a fabulous and fun poem about Nora! I love her hair. Loved the "j" extravaganza and the cool dance-like tone to the poem - written in the language the child would use.
I'm jivin' to joy, and I must confess,
if anyone minds, I couldn't care less --
I'm jivin' to joy that jiggles my toes
and jammin' to jazz my heart only knows.
Fantastic!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
What a fabulous and fun poem about Nora! I love her hair. Loved the "j" extravaganza and the cool dance-like tone to the poem - written in the language the child would use.
I'm jivin' to joy, and I must confess,
if anyone minds, I couldn't care less --
I'm jivin' to joy that jiggles my toes
and jammin' to jazz my heart only knows.
Fantastic!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Yelena, thank you so very much for your wonderfully encouraging comments. I truly appreciate it. Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
Awesome picture to accompany your upbeat poem about Jiving and jazzing and it makes me just want to get up and join right in.
My favorite line: "If anyone cares, I couldn't care less!" That's what I'm talking about. 8-)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
Awesome picture to accompany your upbeat poem about Jiving and jazzing and it makes me just want to get up and join right in.
My favorite line: "If anyone cares, I couldn't care less!" That's what I'm talking about. 8-)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
I'm Jivin to joy, that's greate Photo, that's a beautiful expressed poem, very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
I'm Jivin to joy, that's greate Photo, that's a beautiful expressed poem, very nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Lakeport, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from RodG
Ah, Brooke, this young speaker reminds me of my granddaughter whom I took to the park today. She, too, seemed to be "jiving to joy" and that joy was infectious.
Love the use of J-words that make the song seem almost Cajun.
A fun read as always.
Rod
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
Ah, Brooke, this young speaker reminds me of my granddaughter whom I took to the park today. She, too, seemed to be "jiving to joy" and that joy was infectious.
Love the use of J-words that make the song seem almost Cajun.
A fun read as always.
Rod
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Reminds me of my Mattie. She looks about the same age and loves life. This is grate Brooke. Sawyer gets a break. Blessings to you guys.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
Reminds me of my Mattie. She looks about the same age and loves life. This is grate Brooke. Sawyer gets a break. Blessings to you guys.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Ben. Yep, four days a week Miranda goes to work in the afternoons without Sawyer, and on those days she hangs out with Nora. Brooke
Comment from aanneee
Ah! Sawyer's forever friend, What a great picture, captured at the right moment to inspire your words...just top drawer as always and a pleasure to read - Dinah
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
Ah! Sawyer's forever friend, What a great picture, captured at the right moment to inspire your words...just top drawer as always and a pleasure to read - Dinah
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Dinah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a happy-go-lucky little poem,
Brooke - so light-hearted and entertaining.
Just love the rhyming couplets.
Glad I popped in.
Margaret
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
What a happy-go-lucky little poem,
Brooke - so light-hearted and entertaining.
Just love the rhyming couplets.
Glad I popped in.
Margaret
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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What a joy to see you here today, Margaret :-) Thank you so very much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a virtual 6 Brooke, that was some jitterbug jiving beat, in this poem, it swings so well with your words. Memories!! How I loved those days. It's so nice to see Nora dancing around like that. 5 years old, she is really having fun! Brilliant! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
This is a virtual 6 Brooke, that was some jitterbug jiving beat, in this poem, it swings so well with your words. Memories!! How I loved those days. It's so nice to see Nora dancing around like that. 5 years old, she is really having fun! Brilliant! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Sandra. She and Miranda have been together since Nora was born. I love how happy they make each other. :-) Brooke