Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

Definitely a rhyming poem with a tone. The entirety of the poem is remarkable. Outstanding.
"'m jivin' to joy that jiggles my toes
and jammin' to jazz my heart only knows.
I'm feelin' the pulse of a jitterbug beat
that's pulled me to jumpin' right outta my seat."

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, Daniel :-) Brooke

Comment from Donya Quijote

Excellent

This was a fun and bouncy read. I knew from the title I was in for a treat. Love the use of j words. So much fun to say. We can learn so much from kids. When's the last time you did the jitterbug or something akin to it? You make me feel young at heart reading this. Another good one....

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, Donya :-) I've never done the jitterbug in my life. In sixth grade I took a ballroom dancing class through school and we had to do the lindy hop. Boy is that dating me. That is as close as I ever came :-) Brooke

reply by Donya Quijote on 13-Jun-2014

Sounds like fun. I'd love to learn some ballroom dances. I'm particularly fond of the waltz...

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Brooke, and she looks like Nora is loving life...right from giggles to jiving jiggles...LOL...at least they keep you laughing and smiling...I love this picture and your poem...this is a keeper...remind me of Gungalo's site picture...soooooooo very well done you...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Linda, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 13-Jun-2014

your welcome...great day to you!!!beautiful here...luff Linda xxoo

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

What a sweet uplifting and fun poem! The flow is lovely and I can tell your poem was written from a happy place. And that picture of Nora is beautiful. I love it.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

costellsgirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by costellsgirl33 on 12-Jun-2014

You are welcome Brooke :)

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I'm jivin' to joy that jiggles my toes
and jammin' to jazz my heart only knows.
I'm feelin' the pulse of a jitterbug beat
that's pulled me to jumpin' right outta my seat.
Love this Brooke...fabulous photo of Nora....I love the alliteration jiggle. Jivin' joinin'. Just jiggle
I love the joyousness of this
God bless

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

kiwijenny, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Brooke, this is such a fun write with whimsical and driving meter appropriate for the mood of the write. The alliteration is good and strong a-a-b-b rhyming scheme. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from ElegantButler

Excellent

Isn't it wonderful when you can't help but dance? When you soul is so moved by the song in the air or in your heart that your feet are compelled to move to its rhythm.

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, Elegant Butler :-) Brooke

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Awesome photograph of Nora's hair captured in motion. Obviously I love any poem with my name in it :) good use of J sounds scattered throughout. A nice happy theme that makes me want to get up and dance!

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, Joy. It is one of Miranda's best photos ever :-) Hey, if you are in the mood, do it! LOL Brooke