Comment from Bryan G

Excellent

I love this poem. Your poem is so vibrant and alive. You have beautifully captured what it means to be alive. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Bryan, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

I'll be smiling all day and wanting to jive! I read this first thing when I came to work because our home computer is on the fritz, and it just made my day. Evi

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

evi, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Wow! Joy is alive and well wherever those kids are. What a great action shot, with her hair pointing straight up. Wow!

Terrific alliterations of the "j", which I think is a much-neglected letter. LOL! You almost have me wanting to get up and dance. Almost! LOL! I'm jiggling my toes, though.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Adrienne, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

Wonderful use of jolly jays to justify your juicy japery, Brooke. You made me want to dance and that's the power of a good poem - spreading the emotion it seeks to evoke. Loved it!

Mike

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Mike, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

If only we can keep that joy of living in our heart always. Unfortunately, as we grow up, we tend to let life overwhelm us. Luckily I still have my inner child in me :) Another great poem.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you so much, CR :-) Brooke

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Another good poem full of alliteration J's. It's a real happy poem and a good read but try reading it out loud quickly - not easy LOL. Another tongue twister of a poem and a great picture. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

As I just said in my last review, I think alliteration can be overdone, but when it's so cute, as here, it works extremely well.

Very nice uplifting fun read, Brooke, though my 'jiving' days are long gone, which maybe not a bad thing, as I was always hopeless at it anyway. :-)

Best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Ray, I totally agree it can be overdone and in my classes I advocate using it in moderation. Generally I don't like any poetic device that draws attention to itself, which is why I hate mono-rhyming poems where 16 words in a row rhyme. But yes, sometimes there is a purpose for it when it suits the tone. :-) I appreciate that you understand the difference. As always, I appreciate your review. Brooke

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

What a great picture, Brooke. I love Miranda's photography. Your poem is a delight and reads with so much fun with all your "j" words. They sound so good read out loud. I hope she always feels that jivin' jitterbug.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Karyn :-) I love her photos too! :-) brooke

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Isn't the letter J a wonderful one to use to create a light-hearted and original feel - as exemplified by all your J words here - lively and full of fun.

Steve

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Steve, thank you, my observant friend :-) Brooke

Comment from c_lucas

Exceptional

Go with the flow and get down. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a fantastic read. Positive energy is healing energy.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Charlie, thank you so much for your generous and fun review :-) Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 13-Jun-2014

You're welcome, Brooke. It looks like the young lady is full of energy. Charlie