Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Eavesdropping & Time For Action"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
9 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, well the creep(Barry) got the cat in a cheap carrying box...and off he went...and I have got to get a Bard...MANDY....State Farm Commercials...Love this guy...OMG...and now they are about to do something to get to Angela....who knows what...don't want to wait for back up...row row row your boat...LOL...lets see what Lucy and Bard do...a great story movin on...Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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HI Michael, well the creep(Barry) got the cat in a cheap carrying box...and off he went...and I have got to get a Bard...MANDY....State Farm Commercials...Love this guy...OMG...and now they are about to do something to get to Angela....who knows what...don't want to wait for back up...row row row your boat...LOL...lets see what Lucy and Bard do...a great story movin on...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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I love the Bard too! He lets me say anything that pops into my head. I've been accused of being the Bard. Hahaha. Me? Naw... it's just a character... really. Thank you, mikey
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OH sure!!! LOL...so welcome Michael...always...luff
Comment from ravenblack
Public enema number one- perfect description of that scumbag. Do they still have Jack in the Box in California? I have not seen one in ages. I think they are gone from the Midwest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Public enema number one- perfect description of that scumbag. Do they still have Jack in the Box in California? I have not seen one in ages. I think they are gone from the Midwest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Yes! All over the place. They give away free tacos when the Lakers win. Ouch! Working on getting them out of the water. I don't want this to be a harpoon battle under the sea.
Comment from CR Delport
Another well written chapter. Barry is a real a-hole and I start to wish all things bad on him. The Bard is a hoot as always. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Another well written chapter. Barry is a real a-hole and I start to wish all things bad on him. The Bard is a hoot as always. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you. I love writing the Bard!
Comment from seaglass
So we are now here, ready for action. I'm sure Bard will continue to surprise everyone. Their low expectations of him work in his favor.
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So we are now here, ready for action. I'm sure Bard will continue to surprise everyone. Their low expectations of him work in his favor.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Excellent work getting the parties together in a believable way. Great diatribes by the Bard. Toooo funny. Hopefully they can prevent anything terrible happening to Nettie. NG
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Excellent work getting the parties together in a believable way. Great diatribes by the Bard. Toooo funny. Hopefully they can prevent anything terrible happening to Nettie. NG
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Now, it's getting too exciting. That was a good chapter with the cat being retrieved, now for fun on the island. My daughter has been there a number of times. Great write, as always. Faye
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Now, it's getting too exciting. That was a good chapter with the cat being retrieved, now for fun on the island. My daughter has been there a number of times. Great write, as always. Faye
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
Comment from Sankey
Another great blurb my friend. First some chatter then the spags ok!
You been reading my stuff huh! You know that in New Zealand an ENEMY! comes out "enema!" Remember my line "with friends like you who needs enema's ie you give me the shits ha!
ha Well... he has a cheap carrier." OR A CHIP CARRIER HEHE
Spags
go(-t)-to-hell.
the(a)n the beautiful island
He star(-r)ed up at the deck.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Another great blurb my friend. First some chatter then the spags ok!
You been reading my stuff huh! You know that in New Zealand an ENEMY! comes out "enema!" Remember my line "with friends like you who needs enema's ie you give me the shits ha!
ha Well... he has a cheap carrier." OR A CHIP CARRIER HEHE
Spags
go(-t)-to-hell.
the(a)n the beautiful island
He star(-r)ed up at the deck.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Ha! That must have stuck in my head! I have trouble with those R's whether to double or not to double, that is the question!
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Yeah well if he "starred " up at the deck he must have had stars in his eyes ha!
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Aweeeeeeee------hhhhhhh, lots of live action!!!! This is getting suspenseful. Now, they can't wait for backup. Maybe, they should wait? That Bard is some character. What a class act, wonder if he ever gets on their nerves? He brings humor to the mix. Is that Catalina island? Great chapter! later Lion King.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Aweeeeeeee------hhhhhhh, lots of live action!!!! This is getting suspenseful. Now, they can't wait for backup. Maybe, they should wait? That Bard is some character. What a class act, wonder if he ever gets on their nerves? He brings humor to the mix. Is that Catalina island? Great chapter! later Lion King.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Yep, Catalina! I think I'm gonna have the Bard drown that Abdullah jackass. I hate child molesters! The Bard gets on some of their nerves, especially when he's on to them. He's fun, he can say anything that pops into his head... which means that I can say anything that pops into mine! Hahaha. later, miguelito
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LOL! you are clever. The Bard is like your voice. I'm glad we got a few people on here that takes a gamble. Most play it safe and are boring. Same ole' boring poems you seen a million times. I can't read that stuff all day. It's too serious,no personality. They are being professional but bores me. I think we been stirring up the pot pretty darn good. I speculate, they think we are nuts! Whatever, they can stay in their safe zone while we rock the Jolly Green Giant tree. We are getting their attention!
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Phyllis once said, "The Bard is YOU!!!!" Hahaha. Oh, yeah. Reviewing can be grueling reading the same crap over and over. The buying public feels the same way. You can tell when you're reading something good, it just wakes you up. You say, "Whoa!" Hell, they can be as jealous as they want of Dean, but his pieces are "WHOA!!" No one is stopping anyone from doing what he does. Hahaha. Believe me if they could they would. Oh yeah, if their panties are in a bunch we're doing something right!!
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We sure got the in a bunch Mikey. i believe, they have learned my signature and yours too. They must not have a sense of humor. Bet some of them would like to run us out of town. LOL!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Yay! THey can save little Nettie from a horrible rape trauma... phew! Talk about luck. Good thing they got to the vet when Barry did. Great chapter! :)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Yay! THey can save little Nettie from a horrible rape trauma... phew! Talk about luck. Good thing they got to the vet when Barry did. Great chapter! :)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Glad you liked it. Yeah, I couldn't stand the idea of those creeps touching that poor girl. Maybe Abdullah will fall off the boat and the Bard won't be able to "save" him from drowning!
