A Giggle
a poem in mixed meter151 total reviews
Comment from Liandra
Giggles are very good, and I just had a giggle reading your poem. Light hearted and fun, just what I needed after a weird morning.
The picture is beautiful, and what a lovely smile or more like a giggle maybe?
Thanks for sharing,
:) Liandra
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
Giggles are very good, and I just had a giggle reading your poem. Light hearted and fun, just what I needed after a weird morning.
The picture is beautiful, and what a lovely smile or more like a giggle maybe?
Thanks for sharing,
:) Liandra
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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Liandra, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, your poems are lovely.
Liandra
Comment from amahra
I'm going to start calling your Mother Suss, LOL I really loved this poem for the rhyming. It really did remind of the Dr. Suss. And I'm sure I didn't spell it correctly. I'm writing a book so I have my fanstory book on hold and won't be posting for a while. But will continue to read you.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
I'm going to start calling your Mother Suss, LOL I really loved this poem for the rhyming. It really did remind of the Dr. Suss. And I'm sure I didn't spell it correctly. I'm writing a book so I have my fanstory book on hold and won't be posting for a while. But will continue to read you.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Amahra, thank you so much :-) Writing a book - good for you! Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, we can see he is having some fun with this delightful photo. Love the descriptive words,
wonderfully, wondrously right and
hootingly, howlingly good.
This one just does bring a smile to the face of the reader.
valda
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
Yes, we can see he is having some fun with this delightful photo. Love the descriptive words,
wonderfully, wondrously right and
hootingly, howlingly good.
This one just does bring a smile to the face of the reader.
valda
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
You're so right the magic of a giggle that releases into laughter is wonderful. As they say laughter is the best medicine, and a child's laughter is gloriously infectious as it is so innocent and beautiful. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
You're so right the magic of a giggle that releases into laughter is wonderful. As they say laughter is the best medicine, and a child's laughter is gloriously infectious as it is so innocent and beautiful. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, yes, most definitely, giggles are things that should always be let out; as important to be released as other things are to be held in. Those glorious little grinning faces keep us guessing what will come next. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
Oh, yes, most definitely, giggles are things that should always be let out; as important to be released as other things are to be held in. Those glorious little grinning faces keep us guessing what will come next. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Ric :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
Perfect poetic proposition for this portrait of Sawyer in full bellied guffaw. Love the cadence and double alliterates words. As always a good message.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
Perfect poetic proposition for this portrait of Sawyer in full bellied guffaw. Love the cadence and double alliterates words. As always a good message.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Treischel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Giggles are definitely better out than in, suppressing them can result in hiccoughs, and we don't want that!
Lovely fun poem, nice word pictures to go with the photo.
Patrick
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
Hi Brooke,
Giggles are definitely better out than in, suppressing them can result in hiccoughs, and we don't want that!
Lovely fun poem, nice word pictures to go with the photo.
Patrick
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Patrick, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
What little poem, the rhymes were cute and tender and really make you long for the simplicities of childhood. Sawyer looks like he's having a blast, which makes for the perfect additon to this poem. Good stuff there, Brooke.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
What little poem, the rhymes were cute and tender and really make you long for the simplicities of childhood. Sawyer looks like he's having a blast, which makes for the perfect additon to this poem. Good stuff there, Brooke.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Yvon
This is a nice poem and to some extent I must agree but I have a neighbor who is a full grown man and giggles like a little girl. Definitely not sweet but irritating.
A little girl's giggle is grand, that same type of giggle in a man? Ahhhhh!
Oh, I'm giggling as I write this. But it is the giggle of a man not a little girl.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
This is a nice poem and to some extent I must agree but I have a neighbor who is a full grown man and giggles like a little girl. Definitely not sweet but irritating.
A little girl's giggle is grand, that same type of giggle in a man? Ahhhhh!
Oh, I'm giggling as I write this. But it is the giggle of a man not a little girl.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Yvon, for your amusing review :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
When I was a kid I found too many adults that told me not to giggle. What's a kid supposed to do. I say we should let them be kids and be joyful. I really enjoyed this well written verse, it was a joy to have read... John
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
When I was a kid I found too many adults that told me not to giggle. What's a kid supposed to do. I say we should let them be kids and be joyful. I really enjoyed this well written verse, it was a joy to have read... John
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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John, how sad adults wanted a child to be serious. Adults have far too many times when serious is called for. Kids should be giggling all the damned time :-) Thanks for your review :-) Brooke