Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Rescue and A Cat And Rat Story."Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
9 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
Moving along. The story is smooth and the surprises are many. But you fold them in flawlessly and I never get lost. The Bard is a unique charachter and beyond funny. This has TV written all over it. NG
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Moving along. The story is smooth and the surprises are many. But you fold them in flawlessly and I never get lost. The Bard is a unique charachter and beyond funny. This has TV written all over it. NG
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from seaglass
This is good planning, (the rat with the chip) as good as a cell phone for tracing location. I think Bard must have written some of Bob Dylan's later songs, the ones that had senseless lyrics.
Lucy wrote on a piece of paper and showed it to Susan(d),drop 'd'.
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This is good planning, (the rat with the chip) as good as a cell phone for tracing location. I think Bard must have written some of Bob Dylan's later songs, the ones that had senseless lyrics.
Lucy wrote on a piece of paper and showed it to Susan(d),drop 'd'.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, loved the ironic humor in this one. A clever way to trace Elsa's whereabouts when she picks up her bugged cat or if someone else does...hummm. Keeping the reader on edge. Original plot and its filling out nicely. One small thing, misspell The cat spied diner - should be dinner. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Mikey, loved the ironic humor in this one. A clever way to trace Elsa's whereabouts when she picks up her bugged cat or if someone else does...hummm. Keeping the reader on edge. Original plot and its filling out nicely. One small thing, misspell The cat spied diner - should be dinner. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Errr. Double N's and R's are beyond me. I'm always guessing. I need a little jingle or something! Glad you're enjoying. The next chapter is fun too. mikey
Comment from Sankey
Good work again. I am back working non my b0ok again and I am gonna try and divide my time between reviewing and writing this time. A suggestion has been mad for me to spread the book chapters out more and there may end up being more chapters as well ! Sigh! Now spags and suggestions. and CAPS LOCKS TOO sorry.
hate the AmurrikNISM "dove" COZ ACTUALLY IT IS JUST ANOTHER 'ENGLISH?' WORD THAT HAS DOUBLE MEANIN=G WHAT...A dove IS A BIRD BIRDBRAIN! Sorry for the caps mad caps lock again.
The cat spied din(n)er
at the alter(altar) alter is to change something altar like at the church is as I said altar.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Good work again. I am back working non my b0ok again and I am gonna try and divide my time between reviewing and writing this time. A suggestion has been mad for me to spread the book chapters out more and there may end up being more chapters as well ! Sigh! Now spags and suggestions. and CAPS LOCKS TOO sorry.
hate the AmurrikNISM "dove" COZ ACTUALLY IT IS JUST ANOTHER 'ENGLISH?' WORD THAT HAS DOUBLE MEANIN=G WHAT...A dove IS A BIRD BIRDBRAIN! Sorry for the caps mad caps lock again.
The cat spied din(n)er
at the alter(altar) alter is to change something altar like at the church is as I said altar.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Good idea to spread out the chapters a bit. That will help when you promote. Your regulars can't take advantage of promotions unless it is something new. Yep, "altar!" I'm a deacon now, I should know that. I hope they don't find out and want to alter me. Never thought about "dove" until you pointed it out! What should it be, "dived" then I suppose. Yes, we use "dove" all the time, second nature. Never even connected the two before. Duh!
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Yeah dived is Aussie and probably more acceptable anywhere else except on the West Coadt of Amurrika hehe well particular Boston would be friendly to more correct English hang over the Tea party or some such huh! I do have tons of Carrots to give out so no worries there. Lucky you are a decon mate multiple married men would not qualify in our circles. But hey we have peter Ruckman in our stable of bible correctors and he has some wer=ird ideas and as well as that with all his bible perfection he is off on several issues including having been married several times and STILL a pastor!! Not allowed! Ok nuff said for nmo0w. Good hearing from ya mate.
Comment from Nosha17
A lot of happenings in this chapter, and the cat-rat incident was very cutely written, although I don't like cats or rats. Well-written chapter, enjoyable as always. Faye
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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A lot of happenings in this chapter, and the cat-rat incident was very cutely written, although I don't like cats or rats. Well-written chapter, enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I'm terrified of rats! Hahaha. I saved it for a buddy on site. I like my cats cause they don't want anything from me!! It works out well, leaves me time for my cocker spaniel.
Comment from ravenblack
The cat and rat story- "...Just to introduce a clever plot twist"..hah! Poor deux ex machine rat. Barry's laugh as a popped truck tire filled with hot oil- spot on. Remember Beverly Cleary? Next time, give the rat a motorcycle.
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The cat and rat story- "...Just to introduce a clever plot twist"..hah! Poor deux ex machine rat. Barry's laugh as a popped truck tire filled with hot oil- spot on. Remember Beverly Cleary? Next time, give the rat a motorcycle.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from l.raven
That's my Bard Michael...and get that rat back...sigh...
and Susand...get the address...???
I am glad Angela saved Antionette...but sorry they took her...
and now on with the gang...finally caught up...LOL...
next!!! this is great..loving the story...Luff Linda xxoo
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That's my Bard Michael...and get that rat back...sigh...
and Susand...get the address...???
I am glad Angela saved Antionette...but sorry they took her...
and now on with the gang...finally caught up...LOL...
next!!! this is great..loving the story...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
Poor little rat got eaten by the nasty little cat, what a sad thing boohoo. Well, maybe they can save some of the children from being sold like cattle.
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Poor little rat got eaten by the nasty little cat, what a sad thing boohoo. Well, maybe they can save some of the children from being sold like cattle.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Aha! Very clever reason to have the cat eat the rat. Now we have a connection, indisputable. I hope they can find Nettie... who knows where those monsters might take or hide her.
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Aha! Very clever reason to have the cat eat the rat. Now we have a connection, indisputable. I hope they can find Nettie... who knows where those monsters might take or hide her.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
