Surprise!
a kyrielle120 total reviews
Comment from costellsgirl33
"A caterpillar creeps along
as if he crawls on feet of clay,
but soon he is a butterfly --
surprises happen every day".
Yes surprises do happen everyday! This is such a lovely and sweet poem. That Sawyer is too cute! I love that picture. The flow of your poem is lovely.
Nice job
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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"A caterpillar creeps along
as if he crawls on feet of clay,
but soon he is a butterfly --
surprises happen every day".
Yes surprises do happen everyday! This is such a lovely and sweet poem. That Sawyer is too cute! I love that picture. The flow of your poem is lovely.
Nice job
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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costellsgirl, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome my friend
Arnetta
Comment from tbacha58
The world can seem a lonely place
where smiles and laughs have gone astray,
till soon a friend is at the door --
surprises happen every day.
It si an amazing poem as usual Brooke, but what I love the most is seeing my friend Sawyers reaction, adorable. A beautiful invention of this poem, the away you wrote it, sounds so harmonies. Bravo. Love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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The world can seem a lonely place
where smiles and laughs have gone astray,
till soon a friend is at the door --
surprises happen every day.
It si an amazing poem as usual Brooke, but what I love the most is seeing my friend Sawyers reaction, adorable. A beautiful invention of this poem, the away you wrote it, sounds so harmonies. Bravo. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Terry, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
Delightful Brooke! My grandsons did this to each other last summer at the beach. Not me...I'm claustrophobic and would definitely panic.
Great rhyme and flow to this wonderful kyrielle. I loved the repeating line and as always...the wonderful message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Delightful Brooke! My grandsons did this to each other last summer at the beach. Not me...I'm claustrophobic and would definitely panic.
Great rhyme and flow to this wonderful kyrielle. I loved the repeating line and as always...the wonderful message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Janet, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from reconciled
Dad!...where's your body....I can only see your head Dad!.....lol....what a great moment captured. Amen.....thank God for life surprises....great read No One....love you michael
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Dad!...where's your body....I can only see your head Dad!.....lol....what a great moment captured. Amen.....thank God for life surprises....great read No One....love you michael
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Michael, thank you so very much :-) Dad is a hoot of a guy. He has Sawyer in stitches all the time. Thanks so much for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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i'll bet he's the happiest man in the whole world...-wink-....they look like love to me Brooke....-smile-
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Before Andy and Miranda were married I would watch him play with his nieces, and I just knew he'd be the perfect dad :-)
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lol momma bear always got her eye open...haha....you guys are blessed....its wonderful to see.....-smile-
Comment from Irish Rain
Delightful...and I know this to be true...our neighbor ...up the road planted Poppies a couple of years ago...now I have Poppies! Wonderfully uplifting! Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Delightful...and I know this to be true...our neighbor ...up the road planted Poppies a couple of years ago...now I have Poppies! Wonderfully uplifting! Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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justjo, thank you so much :-) What a great way to get free flowers :-) Brooke
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I know! Wish he'd plant some Wisteria and Honeysuckle!
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Brooke,
A charming summer poem - although the opening lines appear to be describing the flourishing weeds in my garden.
That beach looks lovely! I trust you have discarded blankets and sweaters? We are much warmer, but very wet! LOL
Ron x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A charming summer poem - although the opening lines appear to be describing the flourishing weeds in my garden.
That beach looks lovely! I trust you have discarded blankets and sweaters? We are much warmer, but very wet! LOL
Ron x
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Ron, thank you so much :-) Yes, it is now much warmer here though not nearly as nice as CA where Miranda and Sawyer live. Brooke
Comment from aanneee
As always your verses touch and always a positive and happy read and then your pictures of Sawyer are really such a treat
and this one is no exception - that look on his face says so much - Dinah
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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As always your verses touch and always a positive and happy read and then your pictures of Sawyer are really such a treat
and this one is no exception - that look on his face says so much - Dinah
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Dinah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from emrpoems
The perfect kyrielle structure-- rhyming quatrains
eight syllables in each line and a repeated line.
lovely poem of events that happen all around us every day and that we take for granted or maybe not even notice
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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The perfect kyrielle structure-- rhyming quatrains
eight syllables in each line and a repeated line.
lovely poem of events that happen all around us every day and that we take for granted or maybe not even notice
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from words
I do love your Sunday verse, Brooke.
Yes, "surprises happen every day". That is one of the many miracles of life.
I am often surprised at how many people remain in gloom just because they refuse to open their eyes to this simple fact.
Again, you were my first read of the day and I am glad of it.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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I do love your Sunday verse, Brooke.
Yes, "surprises happen every day". That is one of the many miracles of life.
I am often surprised at how many people remain in gloom just because they refuse to open their eyes to this simple fact.
Again, you were my first read of the day and I am glad of it.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Diane, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Are you going to let someone bury you to entertain your grandchildren? LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Brooke:)
While surprises happen every day, you never surprise me by introducing me to a new poetic format - in this case the complex, but beautiful kyrielle.
I love the way you built this poem around the great refrain, "surprises happen every day." Each of your quatrains uses great mental imagery or an action to illustrate various type of surprises.
I looked for counting errors in your octosyllabic, but I should have known better. Each line was perfect, so once more I send you love and Irish Hugs for your perfection.
Roger
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke:)
While surprises happen every day, you never surprise me by introducing me to a new poetic format - in this case the complex, but beautiful kyrielle.
I love the way you built this poem around the great refrain, "surprises happen every day." Each of your quatrains uses great mental imagery or an action to illustrate various type of surprises.
I looked for counting errors in your octosyllabic, but I should have known better. Each line was perfect, so once more I send you love and Irish Hugs for your perfection.
Roger
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Roger, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your encouraging words and generous stars :-) Brooke
