Surprise!
a kyrielle120 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Ah thanks. Yup, surprises. I am in a lull, I could use a good surprise ... I could use looking at the world this way, all the joy, the magic and those wee things that jump up and smile.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Hi. Ah thanks. Yup, surprises. I am in a lull, I could use a good surprise ... I could use looking at the world this way, all the joy, the magic and those wee things that jump up and smile.
padumachitta
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
I always look to start my morning searching for you and Sawyer. Another goodie Brooke. Looks as if the father and son are having their moment. Blessings to you and the family.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I always look to start my morning searching for you and Sawyer. Another goodie Brooke. Looks as if the father and son are having their moment. Blessings to you and the family.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Ben, thank you so very much :-) Andy and Sawyer are quite the pair :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
A beautiful piece of writing that would appeal to young and old alike. That repeated line is confirmation of the poem's meaning and theme. It has certainly earned its awards. An enjoyable read - Pete
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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A beautiful piece of writing that would appeal to young and old alike. That repeated line is confirmation of the poem's meaning and theme. It has certainly earned its awards. An enjoyable read - Pete
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Pete, thank you so very much for your generous and encouraging response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from dennis0530
A perfect kyrielle.
The boy looks shockingly SURPRISED by the body-less head; the head mildly surprised by the full-bodied youngster.
While the author tells us mostly about the surprising changes in nature, man-made transformations are equally surprising.
How about a long-absent friend who is suddenly at your door and..."Wow! is that you...? You look fabulously different.
That's facial transformation for you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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A perfect kyrielle.
The boy looks shockingly SURPRISED by the body-less head; the head mildly surprised by the full-bodied youngster.
While the author tells us mostly about the surprising changes in nature, man-made transformations are equally surprising.
How about a long-absent friend who is suddenly at your door and..."Wow! is that you...? You look fabulously different.
That's facial transformation for you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Dennis, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Really like your caterpillar with feet of clay, humanity transforming into...butterflies (feet of clay obviously adding a deeper level). Have to tell you, from the photo, Andy in a sand cocoon, I was wondering what he would transform into lol.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Really like your caterpillar with feet of clay, humanity transforming into...butterflies (feet of clay obviously adding a deeper level). Have to tell you, from the photo, Andy in a sand cocoon, I was wondering what he would transform into lol.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, ravenblack :-) I guess Andy transformed into the perfect dad :-) Brooke
Comment from dragonpoet
The repetition helps the poem flow into the moral that life is full of surprises, don't let the bad outweigh the good. Ugly can become beautiful and loneliness can become love in a split second.
The picture shows the fun of surprises.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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The repetition helps the poem flow into the moral that life is full of surprises, don't let the bad outweigh the good. Ugly can become beautiful and loneliness can become love in a split second.
The picture shows the fun of surprises.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Joan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Any time, Brooke.
Joan
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Any time, Brooke.
Joan
Comment from LIJ Red
Ya need to note whut a kyrielle is.(nah, not really.)
This is poetry by a practiced hand. Excellent.
Yeah, a friend at the door-wanting to borrow more money.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Ya need to note whut a kyrielle is.(nah, not really.)
This is poetry by a practiced hand. Excellent.
Yeah, a friend at the door-wanting to borrow more money.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from elchupakabra
Perfection as always, Brooke. I'm restricted to one hand so I'll get straight to it, this is another gem for the collection :) Great work as usual and thanks as always for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Perfection as always, Brooke. I'm restricted to one hand so I'll get straight to it, this is another gem for the collection :) Great work as usual and thanks as always for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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elchupakabra, thank you so much :-) I so appreciate your reviewing even when injured :-) Brooke
Comment from RGstar
Clear imagery with this one, Brooke, the sentiments speak for themselves, such is the wonder of nature and all its elements.
The little one continues to brighten up the screen.
Have a good day,
Rgstar
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Clear imagery with this one, Brooke, the sentiments speak for themselves, such is the wonder of nature and all its elements.
The little one continues to brighten up the screen.
Have a good day,
Rgstar
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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RG, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
I am giving six stars for delightful,,,Brooke I love the photo...I love the refrain...I love the unabashed joy and will think of this on a rainy day...My daughter has just left...with 2month old Emma and in 6 months they will be living in Cambodia....I need a little surprise today......love them so much
God bless
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I am giving six stars for delightful,,,Brooke I love the photo...I love the refrain...I love the unabashed joy and will think of this on a rainy day...My daughter has just left...with 2month old Emma and in 6 months they will be living in Cambodia....I need a little surprise today......love them so much
God bless
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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kiwijenny, thank you so very much. Living in Cambodia - that has to be rough for you. I so appreciate your generous sixth star. Brooke :-)
