Surprise!
a kyrielle120 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
I really enjoyed the diversity of examples you gave - and in particular loved the spirit lifting final stanza :-)
The flowers, butterflies, baby birds and frogs were wonderful "little examples of the phenomenon, and the enlargement to rain/rivers/oceans was a great transition into the most pleasant surprise of all :-)
Nicely done. . .joyfully wrapped up :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I really enjoyed the diversity of examples you gave - and in particular loved the spirit lifting final stanza :-)
The flowers, butterflies, baby birds and frogs were wonderful "little examples of the phenomenon, and the enlargement to rain/rivers/oceans was a great transition into the most pleasant surprise of all :-)
Nicely done. . .joyfully wrapped up :-)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Leineco, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~
I absolutely loved this poem and I was smiling throughout~ Indeed, surprises and magic happen everyday. This is such a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing and God Bless~!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Hello there~
I absolutely loved this poem and I was smiling throughout~ Indeed, surprises and magic happen everyday. This is such a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing and God Bless~!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Kausar, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
Hi Brooke. Absolutely love this poem. I could see this as a PB - the new 'Hungry Caterpillar'. Great pic as well by the way. :-) Tony
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Hi Brooke. Absolutely love this poem. I could see this as a PB - the new 'Hungry Caterpillar'. Great pic as well by the way. :-) Tony
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Anthony, thank you so much :-) I just love the Hungry Caterpillar - I used to read it to my kids over and over and over :-) I appreciate that compliment and your sixth star. Brooke
Comment from amada
I like a dad with a sense of humor! I enjoyed the picture, thank, Miranda. Wonderful Kyrielle style that adapts very well to the fun and discovery picture.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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I like a dad with a sense of humor! I enjoyed the picture, thank, Miranda. Wonderful Kyrielle style that adapts very well to the fun and discovery picture.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
Your description of wonderful surprises is great. There are always fantastic prizes in nature and a visiting friend is certainly a great surprise.
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Your description of wonderful surprises is great. There are always fantastic prizes in nature and a visiting friend is certainly a great surprise.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, evilynne, for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Nice to see revival of some poetry forms. The Kyrielle used to be quite common here on FS, and lately it has been under-represented. I liked your poem and the Repeating Refrain - Surprizes happen every day. They sure do!
A wonderful message and another poem for that motivational book. Great pairing of photo and poetry.
Rose.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Nice to see revival of some poetry forms. The Kyrielle used to be quite common here on FS, and lately it has been under-represented. I liked your poem and the Repeating Refrain - Surprizes happen every day. They sure do!
A wonderful message and another poem for that motivational book. Great pairing of photo and poetry.
Rose.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Rose, so much :-) Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
I love the message of hope in this poem, Brooke. A lot of times things seem unchangeable but then in the blink of an eye "surprises happen". Great examples in each stanza. 8-)
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I love the message of hope in this poem, Brooke. A lot of times things seem unchangeable but then in the blink of an eye "surprises happen". Great examples in each stanza. 8-)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so very much for your generous rating and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
As they say the only constant is change, which does translate into 'surprise' - something life is filled with.
Nicely done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
As they say the only constant is change, which does translate into 'surprise' - something life is filled with.
Nicely done.
Patrick
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Patrick, for your thoughtfulness :-) Brooke
Comment from martha france cannon
so great. I enjoyed this poem so much. the language of the words became descriptive pictures. the words did shape this poem. I read this poem and began to feel good. I could see the poem. the flow is so very good. no confusion.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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so great. I enjoyed this poem so much. the language of the words became descriptive pictures. the words did shape this poem. I read this poem and began to feel good. I could see the poem. the flow is so very good. no confusion.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Martha, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mstad55
Some how I'm not sure I would be all that excited finding a head on the beach. It's kind of frightening, although in a pinch, you can probably use it for a volley ball. Good Job with all the surprises. Mike
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Some how I'm not sure I would be all that excited finding a head on the beach. It's kind of frightening, although in a pinch, you can probably use it for a volley ball. Good Job with all the surprises. Mike
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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LOL Thanks for the review and the laugh, Mike :-) Brooke
