Surprise!
a kyrielle120 total reviews
Comment from JB Lynn
I love the "surprises happen every day" repeating line. I like the different examples you used from nature, and how you give it a wider relevance in your final stanza. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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I love the "surprises happen every day" repeating line. I like the different examples you used from nature, and how you give it a wider relevance in your final stanza. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, JB :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Indeed they do-surprises, whether good or bad are part of life.
A clever and thoughtful kyrielle poem.
The captured image is so captivating-child's play.
Perfect structure and a thoughtful repeating line.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Indeed they do-surprises, whether good or bad are part of life.
A clever and thoughtful kyrielle poem.
The captured image is so captivating-child's play.
Perfect structure and a thoughtful repeating line.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Seken, thank you so much for your gracious and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, this is a creatively rhymed and metered poem that is wistful and full of the joys that childhood brings. You have captured a treasured moment in words. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Brooke, this is a creatively rhymed and metered poem that is wistful and full of the joys that childhood brings. You have captured a treasured moment in words. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Gracie Ann :-) Brooke
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Brooke,
It's no surprise to me, my friend
That yet again a gem you've penned
In perfect rhyme and metre too
(But that's what we expect of you)
And I look forward every day
To sunshine conjured up your way.
Reg
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Dear Brooke,
It's no surprise to me, my friend
That yet again a gem you've penned
In perfect rhyme and metre too
(But that's what we expect of you)
And I look forward every day
To sunshine conjured up your way.
Reg
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Reg, thank you so much for your poetic response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from daeneam
This is a kind of poem that lifts my spirit up telling me that we have to look to things at different perspective. It's message is hope and I want to thank you for using your God-given talent in the most positive way! God bless us!
c", Mae
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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This is a kind of poem that lifts my spirit up telling me that we have to look to things at different perspective. It's message is hope and I want to thank you for using your God-given talent in the most positive way! God bless us!
c", Mae
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Mae, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Ah the joy of new life unfolding and entering the world - always a wonder and always a miracle. You poem captures the joy of new things.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Ah the joy of new life unfolding and entering the world - always a wonder and always a miracle. You poem captures the joy of new things.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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marijmd, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
LOL I love Sawyer's face in this picture, Brooke. I love the positive attitude in your poem and the joy of turning something negative into a grand discovery.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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LOL I love Sawyer's face in this picture, Brooke. I love the positive attitude in your poem and the joy of turning something negative into a grand discovery.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Karyn, for your thoughtfulness :-) Brooke
Comment from NightWriter
Surprise! is another outstanding poem that reflects a world of surprises, miracles, and realities. They are all truly surprises!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Surprise! is another outstanding poem that reflects a world of surprises, miracles, and realities. They are all truly surprises!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Steve, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, Your poetic words for 'Surprise' are absolutely true. All types of surprises happen every day. When a baby is born, it's a surprise that is very hard to realize. "Out comes this perfect little formed human!" It's amazing! You work was thought provoking for me. Ha! Carole
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Brooke, Your poetic words for 'Surprise' are absolutely true. All types of surprises happen every day. When a baby is born, it's a surprise that is very hard to realize. "Out comes this perfect little formed human!" It's amazing! You work was thought provoking for me. Ha! Carole
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Carole, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Quire's Gal
i couldn't love this more Brooke. Every line sails smoothly as silk in this poem. This moves like a song with a repeating refrain in the last line in each stanza.
You've outdone yourself with this piece.
Katherine
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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i couldn't love this more Brooke. Every line sails smoothly as silk in this poem. This moves like a song with a repeating refrain in the last line in each stanza.
You've outdone yourself with this piece.
Katherine
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Katherine, thank you so very much for those wonderfully encouraging words and for your most generous sixth star :-) Brooke
