Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Angela Plays It Cute, Ransom Demands"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from ProjectBluebook
You spent a lot of time on this one. The big picture is geting clearer. Talking about runnaways, finding families for them. Probably just a front. This looks really neat and clean. You are getting better and better. Awe, I suspected some kind of ransom. 200 million! wow! That's a nice schooner. Looks shipshape to me but what do I know. Things are developing nicely and there is a lot of info in this chapter. I did me damage. Good luck sailor. Avast ye ... mark ten fathoms.
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You spent a lot of time on this one. The big picture is geting clearer. Talking about runnaways, finding families for them. Probably just a front. This looks really neat and clean. You are getting better and better. Awe, I suspected some kind of ransom. 200 million! wow! That's a nice schooner. Looks shipshape to me but what do I know. Things are developing nicely and there is a lot of info in this chapter. I did me damage. Good luck sailor. Avast ye ... mark ten fathoms.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Slowly the picture is starting to come into focus. Angela is quite clever. I think Harpster might get a shock of his financial status. This is another well written chapter.
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Slowly the picture is starting to come into focus. Angela is quite clever. I think Harpster might get a shock of his financial status. This is another well written chapter.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
