I Played My Song
a wrapped refrain173 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Brooke no wonder why you are # one poet
It' amazing how you are a Master of so many ormats
Love this one. Of how you used the wrapped refrain
Clever
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Brooke no wonder why you are # one poet
It' amazing how you are a Master of so many ormats
Love this one. Of how you used the wrapped refrain
Clever
Gert
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Gert, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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smiles
Gert
Comment from Bill Schott
It sure looks like you followed the description and made it into something significant. It seems like it would be difficult to end up with something solid all the way through with this kind of required set up. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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It sure looks like you followed the description and made it into something significant. It seems like it would be difficult to end up with something solid all the way through with this kind of required set up. Nice poem.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JB Lynn
Such a sweet and tender poem. I like the "wrapped" format, and it acts as a nice subtle parallel to the way a chorus in a song might work - which is appropriate image, considering music is the subject, here. I've been traveling on vacation, so I'm not sure if this contest is closed yet, or not. If not, I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Such a sweet and tender poem. I like the "wrapped" format, and it acts as a nice subtle parallel to the way a chorus in a song might work - which is appropriate image, considering music is the subject, here. I've been traveling on vacation, so I'm not sure if this contest is closed yet, or not. If not, I wish you luck!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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JB, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
my granddaughter has a selection of keyboards she plays with, and then she does fiddle with the real piano 9se is 20 months)
it is fun to watch them do their thing.
Great piece, by the way
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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my granddaughter has a selection of keyboards she plays with, and then she does fiddle with the real piano 9se is 20 months)
it is fun to watch them do their thing.
Great piece, by the way
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Petriesan. It is a delight to watch them find their way in the world as they experiment and explore :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. see, I did not have to wait long for the wisdom of the Sawyer poems to come..this is sweet, but really, it is worth remembering, we gotta help out by listening and being there...padumachitta
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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Hi. see, I did not have to wait long for the wisdom of the Sawyer poems to come..this is sweet, but really, it is worth remembering, we gotta help out by listening and being there...padumachitta
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
This has echoes of something from my 'folk singing' past, but can't recall if it is a Dylan or a Simon and Garfunkel - perhaps PPM?
Lovely rhythm and sentiment to it and a lovely message.
Patrick
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
This has echoes of something from my 'folk singing' past, but can't recall if it is a Dylan or a Simon and Garfunkel - perhaps PPM?
Lovely rhythm and sentiment to it and a lovely message.
Patrick
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Patrick, thank you :-) Tell me if you figure out what song is on your mind :-) Brooke
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I will.
Patrick
Comment from closetpoetjester
A thoughtfully constructed riff young man, but apparently NO ONE heard.
I bet Grandma did. LOL AND I bet she wrote about it! LMAO
Terrific verse mate, and although I wasn't expecting the longer lines, they rolled off the tongue perfectly to compliment and summarize your instrumental... BTW, the photo is priceless...you could be the NEXT Bon Jovi, little man...keep on strumming!
Hugs P
x
PS Please tell Grandma, GREAT poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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A thoughtfully constructed riff young man, but apparently NO ONE heard.
I bet Grandma did. LOL AND I bet she wrote about it! LMAO
Terrific verse mate, and although I wasn't expecting the longer lines, they rolled off the tongue perfectly to compliment and summarize your instrumental... BTW, the photo is priceless...you could be the NEXT Bon Jovi, little man...keep on strumming!
Hugs P
x
PS Please tell Grandma, GREAT poem.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Phillippa. Right now he is aspiring to be the next Tom Petty - he gets very excited when Free Fallin' comes on and sings along :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
What an interesting poetry form this is. I think it would lend itself to music very nicely. I love the subtlety of this love poem.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
What an interesting poetry form this is. I think it would lend itself to music very nicely. I love the subtlety of this love poem.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Lou, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RGstar
A refrain of love, no doubt, and what was the song in which none listened? sometimes rhetorical questions need no answer as they state the obvious. The song sung, listen to and reciprocated. What more could one ask for in life? Especially if it is repeated by someone special.
Best wishes, Brooke.
Rgstar
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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A refrain of love, no doubt, and what was the song in which none listened? sometimes rhetorical questions need no answer as they state the obvious. The song sung, listen to and reciprocated. What more could one ask for in life? Especially if it is repeated by someone special.
Best wishes, Brooke.
Rgstar
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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RG, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Two very good stanzas - perfect wrapped refrains and the content of the first stanza so appropriate, along with the perfect picture. Good Luck in the contest Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Two very good stanzas - perfect wrapped refrains and the content of the first stanza so appropriate, along with the perfect picture. Good Luck in the contest Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
