I Played My Song
a wrapped refrain173 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a delicate piece of poetic art! i love these light-hearted poems you write, they brighten up my days:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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this is a delicate piece of poetic art! i love these light-hearted poems you write, they brighten up my days:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
String along with me as I play my air-guitar? Liked your poem - haven't seen a wrapped refrain before. I thought your words were very inventive - takes two to tango. I hope it's a silent instrument for Miranda's sake (ears) I love classical guitar - Sawyer's would be more like silent notes with nana. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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String along with me as I play my air-guitar? Liked your poem - haven't seen a wrapped refrain before. I thought your words were very inventive - takes two to tango. I hope it's a silent instrument for Miranda's sake (ears) I love classical guitar - Sawyer's would be more like silent notes with nana. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Thank you, Kay :-) I haven't visited since he got the guitar, so I'm not sure if it produces noise or not. LOL He does love to sing though :-) Brooke
Comment from gazzagodbod
love the concentration as he plays his little tune i bet in his mind hes in front of thousands i remember it well lol great poem my friend six for you xgazzax
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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love the concentration as he plays his little tune i bet in his mind hes in front of thousands i remember it well lol great poem my friend six for you xgazzax
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, gazza, for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
A lovely poem about the transformation a person can make to your life,
And Sawyer certainly has to yours, your love and adoration always shines through brightly, I loved your rhyming and the wording was brilliant, I also loved the photo, bless him, he's a born musician I'm sure,
Andrew
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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A lovely poem about the transformation a person can make to your life,
And Sawyer certainly has to yours, your love and adoration always shines through brightly, I loved your rhyming and the wording was brilliant, I also loved the photo, bless him, he's a born musician I'm sure,
Andrew
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
A well written poem about how much difference the right person in ones life can make. They can bring new life to everything and ones life can be changed forever.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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A well written poem about how much difference the right person in ones life can make. They can bring new life to everything and ones life can be changed forever.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Ward, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Herkjv1611
Playing our own song,this is a beautiful figure of speech.Words of a writer are like notes. Write alone with no hitch.Writing a song is creative work.Nice! Exceptional!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Playing our own song,this is a beautiful figure of speech.Words of a writer are like notes. Write alone with no hitch.Writing a song is creative work.Nice! Exceptional!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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cutomampa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Extend my thanks...
Cheers,
cutomampa for...
cu-cucumber
tom-tomatoes
ampa-ampalaya(bitter gourd)
Comment from TELLER OF TALES
Very intense piece by the author, it is something different from other works by the author it is a strong and beautiful written piece.....
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Very intense piece by the author, it is something different from other works by the author it is a strong and beautiful written piece.....
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Teller of Tales, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Leineco
What an endearing love song, to the man who came along
and helped you find your path. Clearly the harmony that
ensued has transformed your aria to a duet :-)
Very nice write :-)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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What an endearing love song, to the man who came along
and helped you find your path. Clearly the harmony that
ensued has transformed your aria to a duet :-)
Very nice write :-)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Leineco, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke,
I like the diaper shot! I was in the dollar store today and saw a butterfly net and thought of Sawyer. He should have one to catch bugs and butterflies, because he likes bugs so much.
This is another lovely poem Sawyer will cherish some day.
Carole
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Brooke,
I like the diaper shot! I was in the dollar store today and saw a butterfly net and thought of Sawyer. He should have one to catch bugs and butterflies, because he likes bugs so much.
This is another lovely poem Sawyer will cherish some day.
Carole
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Carole, thank you so much :-) You're right about the net! I will have to mention it to Miranda. The girl loves to shop - it will give her an excuse to take yet another trip to Target. LOL Brooke
Comment from DALLAS01
Brooke, this poem overflows with a grandma's love. What a duet, huh. I understand completely. My baby is going on seventeen now. I envy you this very special time, it goes all too fast.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Brooke, this poem overflows with a grandma's love. What a duet, huh. I understand completely. My baby is going on seventeen now. I envy you this very special time, it goes all too fast.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
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Dallas, thank you so much :-) My babies are 32 and almost 35 :-) I still call them things like kid and cutie pie. LOL Brooke
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Yep and I still call them kids...the seventeen year old is my youngest grandson. I'm onto the next generation now. Great grand kids. the problem is they are 400 miles away.
