Comment from jandeck

Excellent

I think this one is original, as well as funny. The three lines flow well together, and the syllable count is correct. Great picture compleaments this.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you - not sure if originality is counting for much in the voting :O(

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!

Love last line and its double entendre. Good luck in the contest.

Regards:

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Stephen

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Hello. You definitely wrote a humorous 5-7-5 ending with 17 total syllable count. I found it very clever. This contest is going to be a hard one to vote on because so many are so very good but your 5-7-5 should be a definite contender. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Victor

reply by victor 66 on 04-Jun-2014

You bet.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!"
haha. this is a clever one! i love the wordplay! thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Rebekka

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A very clever and amusing 5/7/5 - good play on words Hyde/Hiding. Good accompanying picture - Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Dorothy

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A humorous and witty play on
words that you have artistically
set out in but seventeen syllables
that is sure to bring a smile to
all who open up your site.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks for the kind words.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. Nice twist of language in the third line. Unfortunately there are people like this. For 17 syllables your humor is superb. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Les

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a very good entry in this humorous 5-7-5 contest, this is a very clever entry! Very witty, creatively, imaginative, I like your chances In this competition! Good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Roy!

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

yes Dr Jekyll where is he Hyding

good humour

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, SC

reply by Smoothiecool on 04-Jun-2014

welcome..SC

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ha ha ha ...Jekyll deserves a Hyding....I like this altered ego poem...think of all the never meets ...batman....Bruce Wayne....superman ..Clarke Kent...
I had twins and if they had been boys , my hubby wanted to call them Clarke and Kent and he'd be superman...I didn't want him to wear his undies on the outside...whitey tighties.. :o)
God bless

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Jenny

I suppose if you'd had two girls you might have called them Wonder and Woman...

reply by kiwijenny on 04-Jun-2014

Yes or Cinder and Ella Snow and White...Beauty and Beast .....no......that wouldn't be right.....:o)

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Could almost be to describe my chalk and cheese children.

Steve

reply by kiwijenny on 04-Jun-2014

My kids are chalk and cheese too