Comment from MagKing

Excellent

Ah doctor Jekyll I'd like you to meet Mr...Now where's he hiding?!
With the explanation on what the poem is about, I think I see the riddle there, and also because am familiar with the TV show The adventures of Louise and Clark..
Great write!
Good luck in the contest!

MagKing

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!


A very good entry into the humorous contest, all syllables are correct. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Mary!

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Ah, dear poet ... this is very clever!

You certainly don't HYDE your light under a bushel! This is a very worthy contender - hope you win.

Sonali

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you for the high praise.

Alas, both my egos are taking a spanking from the runaway leader...

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

That is cleverly written and I loved the picture. I love Stephenson's story. Good use of appropriate words and humour. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Faye - I appreciate the comments.

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

This is a very clever 5-7-5. I love the play on words. It appears that your second line has only 6 syllables, if I am counting right. Perhaps you should say I would instead of I'd (?).

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you.

You may have been confused by the 'Mr' - I will change it to Mister to avoid confusion.

reply by acerisestory on 04-Jun-2014

You are absolutely right! Great poem.

Comment from ruzu27

Excellent

This is a very humorous 5-7-5 poem with the pun. To make sure that the second line is counted as 7 syllables, it might have been a good idea to write the word "Mister". I don't know how fussy the the committee is. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you - good idea to make that change - one other reviewer has mentioned it.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Heh, heh...nice little play on words here, poet 'X'. I just hope he isn't "Hyding" right behind me!

Great little creepy 5-7-5, and pretty funny, too!

Good luck to ya!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Dean

reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Jun-2014

Sure thing,

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Where is he Hyding- man, you actually made me roll my eyes and groan with this one. For such a pun, you deserve a hyding...crap, now I do too.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you - bd puns a speciality

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

Hahaha, hilarious! This is so funny! Well, you definitely hit the make on this one! Great job and good luck in the contest. Awesome!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks for the enthusiastic review.

reply by costellsgirl33 on 04-Jun-2014

You're welcome :)

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Well-penned creative 5-7-5;
Mysterious theme present here, paralleling the character of Jekyll and Hyde;
A haunting, humorous writing, fun to read, a pleasure to review, mystery poet.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you!