Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in good 5/7/5 format and definitely is humorous :-)
love the interrupted line as the speaker realizes Hyde is nowhere in sight and then the play on words with hiding/hyding :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014

Thanks, Brooke.

Steve

Comment from ArtGal

Excellent

Oh no, lol! Of course we know they can't be at the same place at the same time. How very clever! I used to love watching these on TV, scary at the time but always intrigued. Good one, and I wish you the best in this prompt. . .Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014

Thanks, Sharon.

Steve

reply by ArtGal on 06-Jun-2014

You're so very welcome.

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

I loved this. A great play on words. This is really clever, it should do well in the contest. Good luck.


Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014

Thank you!

Steve

reply by DALLAS01 on 05-Jun-2014

you're welcome

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Hi Steve,
I appreciated your clever use of wording to portay this inspired piece of work. I can't believe this did not win, it must have been a very close vote in the contest! Great originality with this entry, well done, Bill

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014

Thanks, Bill.

In fact there was a runaway winner for this - one entry had a great belly-laugh joke which out-weighed any cleverness anybody else could produce...

Steve

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a very cute and humorous 5-7-5 poem. Very clever. I hope it did or does well in the contest.
~~Teresa~~



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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014

Thanks, Teresa.

No luck in the contest I'm afraid - one very funny entry stole all the votes.

Steve

Comment from Visheshta Dahiya

Good

nice one..!!
the words are well chosen and used. the presentation is nice. the picture complements your work.
best of luck for the contest.
Visheshta

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Visheshta

Steve

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

Okay this is another joke within itself. My daughter would love this, she is so into this sort of thing right now. Thanks for the smile.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Besides being a funny 5-7-5, that is a cool ass graphic of the two personalities. It's like a Joker or face card. Nice job with the whole thing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thank you.

The really cool thing about the graphic is that when you look at it upside down, the other name is spelled out....

Steve

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I lover the poem. It is really hard to keep track of an altered ego. Especially when you get older. They tend to wanderer off. It is harder to chase them down. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks for the funny response - gotta go and look for my other half now.

Steve

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

A clever, humorous twist of words to bring out the hoot.
Dr Jekyll is Mr Hyde but how can he find someone that is him, smiles.
I have heard of the Hall of Mirrors and maybe the answer is in there, perhaps? Big smiles.
A Great hoot and well pen.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

Thanks, Ritchie.

Steve

reply by 9999pool on 04-Jun-2014

Welcome, smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))