Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "This Soul Eternal"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
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Comment from martha france cannon
this is a beautiful poem. a colorful word picture. the words became the poem. this poem makes me feel good. also as a feel,a poem should do-its takes me someplace.
I am not a fan of the structure, only because it seems I have to hunt for the next line or word.
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this is a beautiful poem. a colorful word picture. the words became the poem. this poem makes me feel good. also as a feel,a poem should do-its takes me someplace.
I am not a fan of the structure, only because it seems I have to hunt for the next line or word.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
Comment from MagKing
Well am not really so sure about the contest rules..
But I do think you have a fine piece of work here.
"Spiritual poetry?" Am not sure how that goes with this..
Congratulations on your winning!
MagKing
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Well am not really so sure about the contest rules..
But I do think you have a fine piece of work here.
"Spiritual poetry?" Am not sure how that goes with this..
Congratulations on your winning!
MagKing
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
Comment from rouskin
captured a moment grateful flight- more glorious this soul eternal It really deserves to be a winner Outstanding work Congratulations !
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captured a moment grateful flight- more glorious this soul eternal It really deserves to be a winner Outstanding work Congratulations !
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
Comment from amada
I'm spellbound under these lines "caught
inside this strange shell
I dwell, for a spell." Congratulations in winning the contest!
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I'm spellbound under these lines "caught
inside this strange shell
I dwell, for a spell." Congratulations in winning the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I like the colors. Pleasing to the eye. I like anything SyFy. The words almost glow. A mysterious voice, could be God's words channeled through the universe consisting of dark matter and stars, moons ans planets. Nice picture, I can almost detect a mirage, a transparent image. Good job.
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I like the colors. Pleasing to the eye. I like anything SyFy. The words almost glow. A mysterious voice, could be God's words channeled through the universe consisting of dark matter and stars, moons ans planets. Nice picture, I can almost detect a mirage, a transparent image. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from Mike Battaglia
A highly contemplative entry. Not only that, but wonderfully rhymed, and presented creatively. The way your words rise and fall on the page with what is being said adds even more depth. There are two kinds of souls as I see it: old souls, and new souls. This reads from an old soul.
caught
inside this strange shell
I dwell, for a spell.
Wonderfully written, plumbed from very depths of the subject itself. Good job :)
--Mike
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A highly contemplative entry. Not only that, but wonderfully rhymed, and presented creatively. The way your words rise and fall on the page with what is being said adds even more depth. There are two kinds of souls as I see it: old souls, and new souls. This reads from an old soul.
caught
inside this strange shell
I dwell, for a spell.
Wonderfully written, plumbed from very depths of the subject itself. Good job :)
--Mike
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture I love the poem the soul is mysterious that it for sure. Human beings must guard. Life is hard enough on this side. We must be good in case there is worst the other side. Great work.
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I love the picture I love the poem the soul is mysterious that it for sure. Human beings must guard. Life is hard enough on this side. We must be good in case there is worst the other side. Great work.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Wonderful use of space here. This is awesome. I love your choice of words and how thoughtfully you draw the reader across and down the page. Not even a contest. Well done. NG.
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Wonderful use of space here. This is awesome. I love your choice of words and how thoughtfully you draw the reader across and down the page. Not even a contest. Well done. NG.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely synopsis of the enigmatic nature of the soul. Eloquently written, it is indeed a worthy contest contribution. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This is a lovely synopsis of the enigmatic nature of the soul. Eloquently written, it is indeed a worthy contest contribution. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from missjosi
Nice rhythm and I do like the way you have set your poem out with the to rise to fall.... Lovely entry into the competition Good Luck and all the best
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Nice rhythm and I do like the way you have set your poem out with the to rise to fall.... Lovely entry into the competition Good Luck and all the best
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
