Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Angela At Sea, Is It Uncle Barry?"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
11 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
I loved the humour and light heartedness of this chapter. The characters are still as alive as ever. Interesting developments in the plot. Enjoyable as always. Faye
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I loved the humour and light heartedness of this chapter. The characters are still as alive as ever. Interesting developments in the plot. Enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Yay! It wasn't Winston. Thanks for keeping him out of the picture. I assume Barry is someone from Diamond's past and has nothing to do with Blackwell or the Chinese. Looking forward to the Bard talking to the kid's. Just a thought- you might want to do some research on Tourette's Syndrome . The Bard shares some of the same characteristics.
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Yay! It wasn't Winston. Thanks for keeping him out of the picture. I assume Barry is someone from Diamond's past and has nothing to do with Blackwell or the Chinese. Looking forward to the Bard talking to the kid's. Just a thought- you might want to do some research on Tourette's Syndrome . The Bard shares some of the same characteristics.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from l.raven
OK Michael, vhs video came through...and these people shpuld never be in a room together...LOL..and Bard is truly a nut....and some more newbys...LOL...and they well find Angela is no dummy...on a boat somewhere...and her mother knows!!! very interesting...well done you...Luff Linda xxoo
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OK Michael, vhs video came through...and these people shpuld never be in a room together...LOL..and Bard is truly a nut....and some more newbys...LOL...and they well find Angela is no dummy...on a boat somewhere...and her mother knows!!! very interesting...well done you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from robina1978
Yes, you are moving along fine here. I understood it with the intro and found no mistakes. You have a nice balance between narrative and dialogues.
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Yes, you are moving along fine here. I understood it with the intro and found no mistakes. You have a nice balance between narrative and dialogues.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
hum she is a smart cookie to figure out where she is at and hopefully she will be okay and gets rescued with being harmed as well.
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hum she is a smart cookie to figure out where she is at and hopefully she will be okay and gets rescued with being harmed as well.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Ah. New characters. Angela seems interesting. Smart and you are not dumbing her down. Good fot you. Many people of great intelligence already had it at an early age. Wondering who the kidnappers are and their morivatiin. Susan may have a past... getting good already. The Bard is off the hook. Love it!!! NG
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Ah. New characters. Angela seems interesting. Smart and you are not dumbing her down. Good fot you. Many people of great intelligence already had it at an early age. Wondering who the kidnappers are and their morivatiin. Susan may have a past... getting good already. The Bard is off the hook. Love it!!! NG
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Looks like the old security system may reveal clues? Always good to have a backup plan,, and you did. I like the suspense. the boat scene and all. This is like bait. People are the fish. You just hooked me. I won't to know, and got to know what is gonna happen aboard that boat, Uncle Barry seems a suspect, aiding to the kidnapping. You are finding ways to continue the story. Another tributary off the main river. Good addition to the novel. It has grip. Boy, I wish I had more bait for me book. Hard to get new reviewers, they got lock jaw. Outstanding, mate. I need this review, I fell to #100, can't lose me pen. Later Mikey. wackydo
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Looks like the old security system may reveal clues? Always good to have a backup plan,, and you did. I like the suspense. the boat scene and all. This is like bait. People are the fish. You just hooked me. I won't to know, and got to know what is gonna happen aboard that boat, Uncle Barry seems a suspect, aiding to the kidnapping. You are finding ways to continue the story. Another tributary off the main river. Good addition to the novel. It has grip. Boy, I wish I had more bait for me book. Hard to get new reviewers, they got lock jaw. Outstanding, mate. I need this review, I fell to #100, can't lose me pen. Later Mikey. wackydo
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from Sankey
Rally good mate. Love all the confusion and the Bard etc and mad songs and more. SOmeo suggestions for ya and even something came up on Face Book this morning (I got up very early!!)
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I shared something on your time line related to the Math dislike
"Every(one) knows it's Wiiiin....ston. dum...dum...dum...
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Rally good mate. Love all the confusion and the Bard etc and mad songs and more. SOmeo suggestions for ya and even something came up on Face Book this morning (I got up very early!!)
out(-) dated
I shared something on your time line related to the Math dislike
"Every(one) knows it's Wiiiin....ston. dum...dum...dum...
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
Angela is no dummy. She will probably help in her freedom. There is a grain of truth in every insane thought. The girls may find this truth in the Bard's ramblings. Fighting over wealth may bring out unknown suspects. There are two reasons for the conflict. Greed and crime are the two reasons. Find the reason and narrow down the suspects. The girls and Bard are up to it. Great work.
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Angela is no dummy. She will probably help in her freedom. There is a grain of truth in every insane thought. The girls may find this truth in the Bard's ramblings. Fighting over wealth may bring out unknown suspects. There are two reasons for the conflict. Greed and crime are the two reasons. Find the reason and narrow down the suspects. The girls and Bard are up to it. Great work.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Uncle Barry and Aunt Elsa kidnapped their niece? That's pretty tacky! Not a very functional family, is it? And she knows them, can ID them, so what are they thinking? To bribe her with some of the money?
Overall, great chapter, and the bard is awesome as always!
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Uncle Barry and Aunt Elsa kidnapped their niece? That's pretty tacky! Not a very functional family, is it? And she knows them, can ID them, so what are they thinking? To bribe her with some of the money?
Overall, great chapter, and the bard is awesome as always!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
