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Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Ray, Fay, Sam, Moe, Me and the Maid"These are fictional character sketches.
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Comment from Val Crisson
I'm sorry, as I "kinda" get the feel of this poem. But it's a little to "steam of consciousness" for anyone to understand. The rhyming is good, but you lack a real meaning or import to this tale.
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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I'm sorry, as I "kinda" get the feel of this poem. But it's a little to "steam of consciousness" for anyone to understand. The rhyming is good, but you lack a real meaning or import to this tale.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Really? Why so serious?
Comment from kiwijenny
What did he say No Moe writing...Ray dough Fay moe me...I'm singing do ray me fa so la tea ...sound of music style in my ahead as I read your poem
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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What did he say No Moe writing...Ray dough Fay moe me...I'm singing do ray me fa so la tea ...sound of music style in my ahead as I read your poem
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you, Jenny, for giving this a look.
