Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Harpster The Friendly Ghost!"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from nelliesellie
I chuckled when I read the last title. Harspter the Friend ghost. It is not going to be so friendly to some. UI think Junior is an innocent dupe. The idea of power and money lead him on. One person now knows Harspeter is not dead. This person has to be worried about his daughter. He might know enough information to help the case. Great work.
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I chuckled when I read the last title. Harspter the Friend ghost. It is not going to be so friendly to some. UI think Junior is an innocent dupe. The idea of power and money lead him on. One person now knows Harspeter is not dead. This person has to be worried about his daughter. He might know enough information to help the case. Great work.
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Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from ravenblack
More pop culture references from the Bard- the Brady Bunch, no less. Like how he went feral on Junior- a not-so-subtle reminder that as innocuous and slightly off as the Bard may seem, he is still a force to be reckoned with. One typo- captain of the football captain. Trying to keep international intrigue out of this one. Any suggestions? Yes. Don't !!
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More pop culture references from the Bard- the Brady Bunch, no less. Like how he went feral on Junior- a not-so-subtle reminder that as innocuous and slightly off as the Bard may seem, he is still a force to be reckoned with. One typo- captain of the football captain. Trying to keep international intrigue out of this one. Any suggestions? Yes. Don't !!
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Comment Written 30-May-2014
