Soldier's Prayer
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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Dean, congratulations for winning this contest. The message is one that for we Americans spans all of the wars we have fought. Superbly written my friend.
We do not really realize the killing effects of war until we read the history book. I watched a series that claimed in WW11, there were 37 million casualties, an unbelievable number stemming from greed and power to rule the world.
Dean, thank you for this as I have printed it and framed it my friend,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Dean, congratulations for winning this contest. The message is one that for we Americans spans all of the wars we have fought. Superbly written my friend.
We do not really realize the killing effects of war until we read the history book. I watched a series that claimed in WW11, there were 37 million casualties, an unbelievable number stemming from greed and power to rule the world.
Dean, thank you for this as I have printed it and framed it my friend,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thanks, Jim, and what an honor! Being a former veteran myself, I simply wanted to show my gratitude to those who sacrificed everything so that we may have the freedoms we enjoy today.
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Jim. You've made my day!
Comment from words
What an intriguing write.
I find the use of "frigid" as a modifier, especially interesting.
I suppose war does have a cold aura. The coldness of the grave.
Well done.
Hugs, sd
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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What an intriguing write.
I find the use of "frigid" as a modifier, especially interesting.
I suppose war does have a cold aura. The coldness of the grave.
Well done.
Hugs, sd
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
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Thanks, words.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi Dean. Well, your said it all in a few words. Well done. Congrats on the win. I wish that we could celebrate no war and no need to remember the death of people...oh that we could learn to live in peace...
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Hi Dean. Well, your said it all in a few words. Well done. Congrats on the win. I wish that we could celebrate no war and no need to remember the death of people...oh that we could learn to live in peace...
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from evilynne
I think that your poem is a wonderful tribute to all soldiers. It fits the category very well, as far as I can tell. It certainly utilizes air in its theme. I am not great with syllables, but it seems correct.
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I think that your poem is a wonderful tribute to all soldiers. It fits the category very well, as far as I can tell. It certainly utilizes air in its theme. I am not great with syllables, but it seems correct.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
frigid winds
lift soldier's prayer
Heavenward
This piece meets the criteria of the prompt as the syllable count is correct. Good complimentary photo. Clear message the is short, simple and to the point. Congrats on your win my brother.
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frigid winds
lift soldier's prayer
Heavenward
This piece meets the criteria of the prompt as the syllable count is correct. Good complimentary photo. Clear message the is short, simple and to the point. Congrats on your win my brother.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from 9999pool
Congrats on the win. Well done.
A soldier's prayer will speak of his fear and apprehension. Alone in the battle field with a faint heart that the killing of the enemies must go on. It is a sickening thought and may God have mercy on his soul as he prayed frigidly.
Excellent write deserves the win.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
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Congrats on the win. Well done.
A soldier's prayer will speak of his fear and apprehension. Alone in the battle field with a faint heart that the killing of the enemies must go on. It is a sickening thought and may God have mercy on his soul as he prayed frigidly.
Excellent write deserves the win.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from Ekim777
In three neat lines, an ethereal image takes form. For a painful moment a man ad the elements are one. There is no questioning a man's faith here. Does he believe in God? He'd be a damned fool if he didn't. -Ekim777
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In three neat lines, an ethereal image takes form. For a painful moment a man ad the elements are one. There is no questioning a man's faith here. Does he believe in God? He'd be a damned fool if he didn't. -Ekim777
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from faragon
What a beautifully moving way to honor those who have and are proudly serving to keep us free. Congratulations on the many awards you won with this wonderful poem.
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What a beautifully moving way to honor those who have and are proudly serving to keep us free. Congratulations on the many awards you won with this wonderful poem.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from Halfree
Sometimes simple words captures the depth of a moment in time. The photo made this little gem even more powerful. A marine once told me of his experiences in Korea and the retreat from the north during winter. This six word poem,for me, captures a moment and I can still see the cold cracked hands of the marine who sat on his porch with his eyes fixed on a far horizon and told me his story.
Good work.
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Sometimes simple words captures the depth of a moment in time. The photo made this little gem even more powerful. A marine once told me of his experiences in Korea and the retreat from the north during winter. This six word poem,for me, captures a moment and I can still see the cold cracked hands of the marine who sat on his porch with his eyes fixed on a far horizon and told me his story.
Good work.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
Comment from Pegcook
"Soldier's Prayer" is a respectful, poignant cluster of words that pierced the heart of this reader. The illustration and words reflect each others core meaning. Thank you, Dean Kuch for this touching 3-5-3. You spoke volumes with six well-chosen words.
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"Soldier's Prayer" is a respectful, poignant cluster of words that pierced the heart of this reader. The illustration and words reflect each others core meaning. Thank you, Dean Kuch for this touching 3-5-3. You spoke volumes with six well-chosen words.
Comment Written 30-May-2014
