Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
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14 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I didn't realize this was the beginning of a new book. Only after rereading the title did i notice. You do a great job of summing up what happened in the first, what's going on in the second, and building anticipation for what may happen in the next. Nice work with this one.
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I didn't realize this was the beginning of a new book. Only after rereading the title did i notice. You do a great job of summing up what happened in the first, what's going on in the second, and building anticipation for what may happen in the next. Nice work with this one.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Damn, this was a killer and I almost missed it? Nice addition to the novel. You work hard. I like the chopper. Guess, you can't miss them big bold red letters. It gets your attention, I do like it. Sorry, for me tardiness. Maybe, a few doubloons is in order.
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Damn, this was a killer and I almost missed it? Nice addition to the novel. You work hard. I like the chopper. Guess, you can't miss them big bold red letters. It gets your attention, I do like it. Sorry, for me tardiness. Maybe, a few doubloons is in order.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from Sankey
This is a real gem of a beginning for a new book mate. What about my idea of resurrecting Mel Brooks for the Bard's part in a movie. All so funny! Hope you are gonna look at my new inserted Chapter 22 of my Autobiography. A comment and one spag maybe
...okay, no vital organs (injured?). or was it a mass castration ho hum!
I liked in one of the writers stories about a guy with his leg raised so Rory could see his "rod and his tool box" ha.
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This is a real gem of a beginning for a new book mate. What about my idea of resurrecting Mel Brooks for the Bard's part in a movie. All so funny! Hope you are gonna look at my new inserted Chapter 22 of my Autobiography. A comment and one spag maybe
...okay, no vital organs (injured?). or was it a mass castration ho hum!
I liked in one of the writers stories about a guy with his leg raised so Rory could see his "rod and his tool box" ha.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is a great chapter and has that nice little surprise of the helicopter escape. Winding up. it leaves the reader to believe that Bard has found his true love but also leaves it open for changes in the next book. It is a good transition to book two.
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This is a great chapter and has that nice little surprise of the helicopter escape. Winding up. it leaves the reader to believe that Bard has found his true love but also leaves it open for changes in the next book. It is a good transition to book two.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Glad to see The Bard survived, and now you can start afresh. This go 'round - I know you are sick of hearing it from me - focus on the bard and Tenyaya in some more down-to-earth sleuthing. And your headline - commin' should be comin'.
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Glad to see The Bard survived, and now you can start afresh. This go 'round - I know you are sick of hearing it from me - focus on the bard and Tenyaya in some more down-to-earth sleuthing. And your headline - commin' should be comin'.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Wow, that was an exciting chapter, I thought I had missed the end of the book. Well written, with lots of potential for the continuation of the story. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Wow, that was an exciting chapter, I thought I had missed the end of the book. Well written, with lots of potential for the continuation of the story. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from CR Delport
So Winston has escaped? I am sure the Chinese is not too happy with him though, and he will live his life looking over both shoulders. This is very well done.
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So Winston has escaped? I am sure the Chinese is not too happy with him though, and he will live his life looking over both shoulders. This is very well done.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lillith STILL doesn't know Harpster's alive? She should by now, I would think. LOL! So Winston has escaped to do more dirty deeds. The chase is on! Yaaayyy!
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Lillith STILL doesn't know Harpster's alive? She should by now, I would think. LOL! So Winston has escaped to do more dirty deeds. The chase is on! Yaaayyy!
Comment Written 27-May-2014
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, Glad to see Bard is doing good...and Lucy is helping him recover...and then some....every one got there to late to save Winston...and who knows who nabbed him...and yes Lilith is coming on strong...Ruby got the billions...and Tenaya couldn't catch up to Winston...now to return to the room with Rudy...an great ending and a new beginning...let's rumble....love it...so very well written... a great story...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, Glad to see Bard is doing good...and Lucy is helping him recover...and then some....every one got there to late to save Winston...and who knows who nabbed him...and yes Lilith is coming on strong...Ruby got the billions...and Tenaya couldn't catch up to Winston...now to return to the room with Rudy...an great ending and a new beginning...let's rumble....love it...so very well written... a great story...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-May-2014
Comment from Michaelk
I like it. You tied up the loose ends and gave us something new to think about. Although now that Winston is loose I don't think I would be sleeping too deeply at night if I were one of the good guys. Ruby better hire some real good security because I'll bet that Winston is gonna be out for blood. And he still has a biological weapon. Good job.
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I like it. You tied up the loose ends and gave us something new to think about. Although now that Winston is loose I don't think I would be sleeping too deeply at night if I were one of the good guys. Ruby better hire some real good security because I'll bet that Winston is gonna be out for blood. And he still has a biological weapon. Good job.
Comment Written 27-May-2014
